Reviews for "The Half Breeds"

Tue Jan 25, 2005 11:28 am

Well, just from this opening I am really looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. The scene has been set very nicely, with great description and a little hint at the characters. You've opened up just enough questions to make me want to watch this and see what happens. I love the idea of using the Avari and ifnding out what happened to them, what they've been doing all those years Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jan 25, 2005 11:53 pm

Very good start! You've definitely got me wanting to know more and to see how things shape up. You've given us a very interesting view on characters and I want to definitely read up on how things develop! Good dynamics going on already!

Wonderful start!

Kendra
Yeah, I'm an angst lover.lol Very Happy smiley face

Sun Jan 30, 2005 4:27 pm

Wonderful... Just one bit of concrit... can't resist, but aren't Elves supposed to ride bareback? Very Happy smiley face

Tue Feb 01, 2005 1:23 am

woooohoooo!!! Very exciting. I was on the edge of my seat. This is sooooo good! Very Happy smiley face

More, more, more

Talasi

Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:53 am

The descriptions of these new elves are astounding! I can almost see them. Very interesting culture and amazing diversity. The fleeting emotions experienced by Morwe are very vivid. I don't like him at all. He's too sexy for himself....lol

Imladris being described as deserted is somewhat depressing, but I'm happy they will be wintering in Lorien. That's means Haldir. Kiss smiley face

Love it.

Talasi

Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:42 pm

That was soooo hot. *fans self*

Sat Feb 12, 2005 1:47 pm

*sitting in a puddle* This was even hotter than the last one. *fans self* Excellent story with superb smut.......

Wed Mar 02, 2005 2:58 am

This chapter was intriguing in all the right ways. I was suprised by Saironnisse's reaction to what she had shown Morwe and what he would do about it. Urewe is a very interesting character. Morwe is just plain evil I hope he is punished accordingly. I just love Ranohtar and Carniwen.

What is going on with Thandruil just breaks my heart. It's so difficult to picture him weak in any way. I really like Galion too. I'm very curious to know more about this.

This is very well written and you are extremely talented. I'm thoroughly impressed!! You rock smiley face

Very vivid and surreal.

Talasi