Reviews for "The Half Breeds"

Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:43 pm

I'm finally getting caught back up and just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this fic! You've done a wonderful job of creating these characters and giving them substance!! I was totally floored with Ranohtar and his fate, didn't expect that and when it hits you like that and such an impression, you know you're doing a great job of weaving this story together! Keep up the good work!

I'm very interested in seeing where this path you're taking us on leads!!

Kendra Smile smiley face

Mon Mar 28, 2005 3:28 pm

This is just amazing! I can't think of enough words to describe it, really! Magnificant!! I am spellbound! I am very happy to see Haldir, Rumil, and Orophin make their appearance, but all your original characters are so captivating that it doesn't take away from any of them. They are all so real!! I'm drawn into this world and can feel it all around me when I read. Bravo!!!!!!

What happened to Morwe and Nurwe is terrible, but Carniwen is definitely correct in questioning this madness. There is always more to it. I hope she finds her freedom.

As always, Thranduil's despare makes me feel empty. These new arrivals are very intriguing as well. I like their spokesperson.

I hope to see more very soon.

Talasi

Tue Oct 25, 2005 12:57 pm

I'm so glad you are continuing this story! I love it!!!

Mon May 15, 2006 11:43 pm

So, when can we expect chapter 14 and on... This is a great story, please continue! I will be watching for furthur updates. Wink smiley face

Mon Jun 12, 2006 1:23 pm

Finally.

You're back.

Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:27 am

Well I must say that was a great chapter! I started reading at 10:30p.m.,and just now finished it at 12:15p.m. Instead of reading so fast I slowed down a bit to get the emotions of the character "Ranohtar". It was written beautifully! I felt bad for him when he discovered that he had lost his tongue, cut out by that non feeling jerk where he came from Mad smiley face

. Keep it going. Got to find out about "legolas and his Father" and if "Ranohtar gets his revenge!" Great story though.

Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:35 am

By the way. Congradulations on your graduation. So you got your "Bachelors of Arts in Anthropology and history" Huh!! Good job! Wonderful! You deserve to take a break from all that hard work! But not too long Wink smiley face

,Because we will all miss you too much Crying or Very sad smiley face

Tue Jun 13, 2006 1:47 am

Oh Bird!!! I'm so happy to see more of this. Please write more. This is such a great story!!!! I love the acceptance of the elves in Lorien.

Please please please write more soon!

Mon Jul 03, 2006 9:08 am

Thank you for the new chapter. I hope the Lorien elves will be able to help Ranohtar and that he will be able to warn them about the sacrilege being planned by some of the Eastern elves. More story please.

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