Reviews for "Regretful"

Mon Jan 31, 2005 5:35 pm

this was very good!!!!!!!!! i loved it. great view, a little sad, but still really awesome. keep it up!!!

Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:23 am

and then what happened when she walked in?! i must know!
*athanya

Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:43 am

Hi, Kat ---- now this looks interesting??!!! Why and how ---- and where are they going from here???? There are a lot of threads to follow. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Love, Frigg

Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:57 am

Oh! Poor Lothiriel, so self-pitying she is punishing the others around her. An interesting view slanted from the fanon of a happy couple. You bring Lothiriel's feelings clearly to the fore, even while clearly depicting the world she has come to live in.

Strongly written; the opening paragraph itself would stand as a drabble. Loved this line "She wondered what ghost or demon she might encounter around the next corner and openly welcomed it."

Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:38 am

What an intriguing start. Looking forward to the next chapter. Soon i hope I must know what happens next. Eokat

Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:01 pm

Oh my. I must confess that I was quite taken to the fanon myth of a happy marriage. yet you portrayed the character beautifully. Her loneliness and self-deprecation are palpable and touching.
I wish you'd tell us what happened when she came into the room.
(her being more concerned with the trinkets than her husband was quite a telling touch. yet it's his own darn fault, isn't it?)

Wed Oct 05, 2005 1:45 pm

oh very sad and so well written. Enjoyed it immensely.

Wed Oct 05, 2005 4:11 pm

What the---Don't leave this alone here! What happens????? Shocked smiley face

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