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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Mon Aug 04, 2003 1:49 pm
Me!
No I'm not about to blackmail you. I did give the idea up for adoption anyway.
And i'd die to slap his backside too, so...
OK ... back to the main track, I'd advice you to double check the summary and the A.N. at the beginning of the story - they have a few errors. it seems you were in a hurry to update.

Other than that, and this is a tip from someone who reads a LOT of smut *grinns* Very Happy smiley face try to be a little less explicit. If you keep detailling the action in slo-mo it gets a bit weird...
the main er... message.. that's right, message, gets lost in the sea of information.
other than that, go ahead! I'm quite happy to see leggy all covered in chocolate cake mass Cool smiley face
And please correct my name? Hate to sound so bitchy, but it really gets in my nerves...
 

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Last edited by Elentari on Mon Aug 04, 2003 7:03 pm
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LeRouret

Joined: 06 Oct 2003
Reviews: 12
Location: Georgia (unfortunately)
Tue Oct 07, 2003 2:38 pm
Mmmm . . . chocolate and Elves; does it get any better? Laughing smiley face
 
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SingerAngel
Joined: 14 Oct 2003
Reviews: 11
Location: Oz
Tue Oct 14, 2003 2:53 am
Oooooh... choccy cake.... elves... interesting plot..... but good!! And well written.... hehehe.... now I'm hungry!
 
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Anorliriel
Joined: 11 Dec 2003
Reviews: 16
Location: Southern California
Thu Dec 11, 2003 6:35 pm
Naughty but nice. Playful. Light. And there's a 'spoon' in it (inside joke) ... Smile smiley face
 
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Anyathe

Joined: 21 Feb 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Australia
Tue Mar 09, 2004 7:36 am
Damn girl! This was very, very sexy stuff! Go you!
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Tue Mar 30, 2004 12:04 pm
*giggle fit* I love it! Too cute and funny and yeah, provacative too. *vbg* Great job! Smile smiley faceSmile smiley faceSmile smiley face
 
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Maram68

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
Sun Apr 11, 2004 9:50 pm
Two of my favorite things in the world together: Legolas and Chocolate. Great imagery!!!

Thank you!

C.
 
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Tue Apr 27, 2004 11:36 pm
M-m-m-m! Chocolaty elf goodness! My birthday's in October, think you could send him my way to "bake me a cake"? Bounce smiley face
 
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Cele

Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Reviews: 16
Location: Rohan
Wed Apr 28, 2004 5:21 am
Now I could be perfectly happy with Leggy and chocolate...hmmmm good stuff. And I liked the story... Wink smiley face
 
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Xavilyn
Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Maryland, USA
Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:01 pm
Hawt elf covered in a savory milk chocolate with zero calories! I like it! good job!
 
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