Reviews for "Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas..."

Tue Feb 22, 2005 5:37 pm

Yes, thank you for reconsidering and continuing. I look forward to reading more. Smile smiley face

Chappie 7---SQUEE!! Very Happy smiley face

And Chappie 8!!

This should be good: Haldir vs. Alice.

Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:07 am

LMAO! Can't wait for the next chapter:

Haldir vs. Alice Round 2!

"Great Eru! He's killed her!" ---Classic!!

Ok, I think I'll just email my comments to you from now on, so I don't keep making new posts! Very Happy smiley face

Mon Feb 28, 2005 11:39 pm

I love this story! It's hilarious. Especially Haldir. I fret for Alice, though, although I honestly thought Galadriel was joking when she said she saw a pig farmer. I'm assuming she's just going to run into one who happens to do something on her journey that helps or harms her. XD Please continue! Daily updates are great. Wink smiley face

Tue Mar 01, 2005 10:40 am

Ch. 10
Enjoying this new tack. Glad you picked this story back up

Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:53 pm

Wow, this story is really awesome as far as girl-falls-into-middle-earth stories... and you have to admit they do have a certain charm. But this one is particularly well written, the only thing is the fact that English and Westron are different languages, however I understand the need to make them the same within the context of this story, still I think it would have been interesting if she couldn't understand a word... But anyway, the plot is really good and the character Alice is really awesome, plus the twins are my favorite characters so they rock too... I also really like the way you've managed to show a slight mischievous side to the twins without just breaking down and making them totally modern. Also, I'm really glad you haven't done what alot of authors tend to do and just make the twins identical in how they think. They're different people and I'm really glad you've portrayed them as such.

Anyway, thank you soo much for continuing to write, I'm completely loving this fic.

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Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:43 pm

It's wonderful! But you are EVIL! Evil, I say....E-E-V....E...I-L. EEEEVILLL!!!

The only thing that has me smiling is that I know you update regularly. Wink smiley face

This was such a hilarious chapter! XD

Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:55 pm

ah this is wonderful! I love the banter between them all! And Haldir! *thuds*

Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:38 pm

XD That was great. I hope there will be jealous 'spats' between Haldir and Elladan. *rubs hands togetehr gleefully* It's like a cat fight, only Elves are handsome, whereas cats are furry and small, not to mention less likely to seduce you...

I'm having such a good time reading this, especially after a long evening of rehearsal. It's fun to guess what will happen next.

I have my own edited version of the LaCE, as well, especially since Tolkien states that the LaCE are the recountings of a human who only recorded the little knowledge he observed firsthand and may have misinterpreted much. Wink smiley face

Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:13 am

The cruel torture! XD AUGH! But what sweet torture it is...

Uh oh. Looks like Alice will have to exercise more self control lest she end up the hungover wife of Haldir. Ha! I can't wait to see what kind of mess this will turn into... *cackles when no one is looking*

Sun Mar 06, 2005 12:36 am

EVIL CLIFFHANGER! XD But at least you updated. I especially enjoyed Haldir's little speech... "Not ME, you idiot! You!"

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