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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004 Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Thu Mar 03, 2005 10:27 pm
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| OH yay!!!! You've posted the next two chapters!!! I am so delighted!! I just have to say, as the story progresses, your writing has captured the spirit and drawn me in! I just can't wait for more. BRAVA!!! |
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LucyTia
Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Reviews: 16
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Sun Mar 06, 2005 3:00 am
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Oh no! Is this really the end or am I thick and mistaking the end of a chapter for the end of your beautifully written story?
Please say it isn't so or at least hint at a sequel.
Cheers
Vicki |
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Sun Mar 06, 2005 5:26 am
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| a pleasure to read - definately different and very well written, is there any more to come? |
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Belle
Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: NL
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Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:12 pm
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So far love the story.
E/H is my second loved couple.
The story is nice to read and well written !!!
Hope to more very soon.
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Thu Mar 24, 2005 6:46 pm
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| Eruanna, I finally got back to reading and so forth...I have to say, this is the best depiction of Haldir that I have ever read. I really do not like the angry, arrogant, one dimensional warriors (or sex fiends) that appear in so many stories but this Haldir is so complex. And I love the relationship you have built for him. Finally, I love the language both in the characters' mouths and the narration/description (which is beautiful). This is a great story. Surely that was not truly the end (I actually blinked when I read The End). I hope you do more if that really was the end. Great job! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Wed Mar 30, 2005 5:38 am
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Let me just say: thank you for this excellent story. It simply took my breath away.
I hope to read a sequel one day  |
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Aglarendis
Joined: 16 Jun 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Missouri
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Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:31 am
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What a wonderful surprise! As much as I love Eowyn and Faramir as a couple, I am a sucker for good Eowyn/Haldir or Legolas fics. This is the best Haldir/Eowyn fic I have read yet.
I had forgotten just how merry the elves can be. You portray them as so free and joyful, taking delight in everything around them that is good. Yet, unlike so many stories I have read, you do not portray them as free with their physical pleasures.
Thank you for letting Haldir be a virgin. This is clearly what Tolkien had in mind for the elves, just as he meant the sexual act in itself to be the marriage ceremony. You seemed to let Haldir feel just a hint of disappointment that it was not Eowyn's first time as well.
Your notes at the end of each chapter are very detailed and informative. I had never understood what was going on with the mother and father names. Thank you for explaining that. It added an extra special touch to the intimacy between Haldir and Eowyn.
I have just one question. What happens next? Please do not let the story end here! I eagerly look forward to reading much more. |
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stripedtigress
Joined: 24 Jun 2006 Reviews: 3
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Fri Feb 01, 2008 7:59 pm
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I have read this story several times, and each time I have tears in my eyes at the end. I would so love to read a sequel about Haldir and Eowyn's lives after the war, and whether he chooses to fade after her passing this life.
Great story. You are a fantastic writer.  |
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linoleum
Joined: 14 Mar 2015 Reviews: 1
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Fri May 15, 2015 9:23 am
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Thank you thank you thank you.
Love the pairing.
It will be interesting if one day you'll write the after marriage. Just one shot. Maybe about finding out the guy who take eowyn first time. A bit of jealousy... |
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