Reviews for "The Price of Immortality"

Wed Nov 15, 2006 1:06 pm

Yay! I am so glad you're updating this story! I'm glad "Johan" is getting in on the action too! Keep those updates coming.

Wed Nov 15, 2006 9:28 pm

Aww, poor Vanessa. I know what it feels like to be rejected and my heart goes out to her. I hope Legolas gets to know her before he thinks less of her. This is a good story and I am enjoying it.

Fri Nov 17, 2006 6:20 pm

Oh wow, what I chapter! Very heated and intriguing and mysterious. I hope that Lori finds it in her heart to forgive Randy although he made a mistake. Erik is really a handsome devil; a little bit of dark and mystery behind him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:13 pm

Oh goodness this doesn't look good at all for Randy's future with Lori. Tara being with child not realizing who Randy really is and I wonder what would she do once she finds out his true identity. Randy is stuck between a rock and hard place.

Tue Nov 21, 2006 1:17 am

Wow, this is really getting heated between Randy, Erikand Lori. Oh my, I hope Lori knows what she is getting into with Erik. My guess is that he is only using her and I am glad Randy interrupted. I think that if Lori is treating Randy harshly then he should just back away from her and let her see how Erik really is and when Erik hurts her I think she will realize what he is really about and turn to Randy.

Tue Nov 21, 2006 10:08 pm

another good chapter. It was good to read about the meeting with Lord Celeborn and Gandalf, which is definitely a surprise. I am looking forward to knowing more about the mysterious dark force, who now has my attention. I think that Randy deserves to have a life and not be treated like a nobody to Lori. My heart lifted when Randy gave his last words to Lori and Erik and yes he should have some love in his life even though Tara isn't the one that he is in love with. Maybe their love can grow and then Lori will see what she is missing.

Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:03 am

Nah, I don't think its taken too dark a turn...just a pretty good twist!
Hail the return of Gandalf....and me wonders just who this amazing elleth is and perhaps she maybe the sort to capture the soul and heart of Legolas.
Keep writing, enjoying the story muchly.
Cheers

Thu Nov 23, 2006 12:19 am

Wow, I don't know what else I could say about Erik and Lori. I think this is one emotional couple. What do I think about Austin? After seeing his pic, I give him a thumbs up. I wonder what his confession is to Lori? I have an idea but I think I will wait in read the next chapter to find out. Happy Thanksgiving day to those that celebrate it.

Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:30 pm

I'm awful at reviewing but just wanted you to know I've been following since "In the Age of Men" and was happy when I saw you had started to update again. I would really like to see where you're going with it so please don't end it prematurely! It's always so sad when authors feel no one is interested and rush the end of the story. I'll try to be better about reviewing. Smile smiley face

Sun Dec 17, 2006 6:54 pm

Chapter 14: Wow Siladan. Now I know what is going through Erik's mind and why he acts the way he does. My heart still goes out to Lori wanting to be loved and wanting Erik to tell her so. I hope you update this soon. I am off to reading chapter 15, but please keep me posted on the next story or update.

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "The Price of Immortality"