Reviews for "The Price of Immortality"

Sun Dec 17, 2006 7:20 pm

Chapter 15: Just finished reading chap. 15 and the scene with Gandalf, Legolas and Elrohir had me sitting on the edge of my seat. The injured elleth was a sad case, but I wonder if Legolas will reunite with her and if so where does this leave the woman that worked at the cafe (I forgot her name) who had an interest in Legolas? The twins are difinitely trouble and I hope Rumil gets his revenge on them. I really don't understand why they hate him so much.

Tue Feb 06, 2007 4:24 am

'Nother chapter! 'Nother chapter!(stomps foot impatiently) btw, where Celeborn is, wifey's not far away, riiiight? And what about Erestor? Or Radagast? Heck, can we have some First Agers too? Like Maglor, For instance?

Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:23 pm

I say keep going. This is a very interesting 'can't put this story down' story. I was told once that I shouldn't worry about what other's think and keep writing 'my story'. It is good to have reviews and all but some people just don't feel like it or don't know what to write. At first when I wrote my story which I also had planned or dreamed two years ago, I felt nervous or scared that no one would like it or that it was dumb or I should never even thought about writing. But then someone told me that I shouldn' t just write for others but for myself as well. Almost like writing in a journal something personal only this is a permissable journal that any one could read. If they like it fine! If not that is fine too! Can't please everyone I'm told. In the end it is 'mine' forever! So keep on writing! It is a story for me as well as for you to enjoy! Don't forget the "Trilogy"too!!

Sun Mar 25, 2007 2:23 am

Siladan, i just read the message you left about wrapping it all up. It has finally forced me into action to actually review this story. I have been a fan of this series from the start but never left a message of my appreciation. So here it goes... This series is by far the most well developed fan fiction i have ever read, and believe me i have read plenty( ive been at it for almost nine years). I would hate to see this story fall into the lost world of incompleted fan fiction. there are so many plot twists that i would love to see forfilled, such as the Erick, Eli story and if they are a tad more evil then we all suspect. The Randy and Lori story, will they ever be together again and if so could they handle a relationship when Randy is having someone elses child. And finally the most facinating plot line, who is this new evil and how are the elves going to defeat it.

I'm going to finish up by trying to appeal to your heart. When you didn't up date this story for months at i time i had actually given up hope and stopped visiting this site because all the other fanfiction was just not up to scratch (no offence to other authors!). Finally i decided to check to see if something had changed and to my delight i found that seven more chapter had been posted. I seriously did not leave my computer until i had read them all. This kind of fan fiction deserves a spectacular ending, and that means developing all the plots and tying all the lose ends. I believe that if you do that this story would go down as the most imaginative, well developed fan fiction in this genre.

i really hope you continue on. Keep up the amazing writing and good luck. ( you will diffinately be hearing more from me if you do)

sincerly Mrs Vicky Smith

Wed May 09, 2007 4:56 pm

Okay Siladan! Come on keep it going. Please with a few sprinkled reviewers on top! I know how you feel. I have had only one so far. But you know what that doesn't matter. Every so often I would go on the site to see if anyone read it. I would see the number of hits and then I think well someone must be looking at it look at all the hits! That is good enough for me. People just have a tendency to not want to leave a review. Why I don't know? I am guilty of doing that every so often. Sometimes if its the first time seeing the story and there are quite a few chapters, I won't stop till I am done then I review. Your story is like that. You see something you like and it looks good ya just keep going to you've licked the whole thing dry! Oh wait Im thinking food now. But anyways don't worry about them you still have some faithful readers who want to read your story. I'll be watching.

Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:43 am

Hey, this is great - admittedly im biased, i adore the twins. But that aside so far this is better than the first one - more please!!!

Tue Feb 04, 2014 6:25 pm

How good to see that you have picked this up again. I began to read it when i first began reading Tolkien fic - but thought it abandoned and so I did not go past the prologue.

So now I can look forward to reading it as it is not, after all, an 'orphaned' tale!

Thu Feb 06, 2014 8:51 am

Well, that @sshole of an ex did one thing. He was awesome incentive for a great storyteller. Smile smiley face

I just happen to want to reread a few chappies and imagine my delight...with just you comment! Darn it, what will happen with a full chappie? I so know I am taking off to read it. Also, thanks for the love of mapping out the sequel! Could kiss you for that one...or at the very least wash your car! Xoxoxo

Fri Aug 15, 2014 12:31 am

Holy, you are back! Well so am I having just logged on here and read your message. New muse, new adventure.....hold a sec while I get some popcorn!

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