Reviews for "Double Trouble"

Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:52 am

I like this! It was a nice glimpse into Elrond's home life, very entertaining! Very Happy smiley face

Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:58 am

As usual with this lovely....er...a/u...wip...series thingy, lol, a wonderful addition Zhie. This is the reading I love to do when other stuff does my head in or overwhelms me or I'm just swimming from working on my own. The brilliant way you've tied all these together and yet each one stands on its own merit as well is pure genius and so original. I also like the idea of Glo being from the kinder gentler house of Finarfin as opposed to other theories, especially for the purpose of these vignettes. One doesn't ever get bogged down in the idea of a darker ancestry. Just wonderful as usual my dear. I wonder if you'll write any more.....

LOL!

Sat Apr 02, 2005 9:58 am

I've never read any of the AU stuff referred to and so I can only give an opinion of this piece on its own. It's a nice scene and you have a very distinctive 'voice' in your writing style, which is good since this is a scenario that I've seen a lot. The only thing I kind of stumbled on is that I can't imagine Celebrian saying 'bull', even in a humour piece. Sorry. Surprised smiley face

ops: But that might just be me being picky - I'm not that keen on modernisms in fics. (but that's just personal opinion) On the whole it was quite enjoyable. Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 04, 2005 1:34 am

As the mother of a five month old, I can completely sympathise with both Celebrian and Elrond. it's always funnier when it's someone else. And I could just see the looks on their faces. I love it! Laughing smiley face

Mon Apr 04, 2005 11:52 am

Oh, Zhie... goodness...out...of...breath...laughing... Laughing smiley face

Totally hilarious... hahaha...

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