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Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Tue Jul 12, 2005 6:31 am
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| It will be, as soon as I hear from my beta. My hard drive crashed and I lost the next four chapters; I am hoping she still has the next two. Cross your fingers. And thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate both. |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:44 am
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 mmmm,ok your really getting good at twisting things around ,so her mom is alive? mabye?
i like this version of this story a little better ,but not to say the other wasnt good too, this does explain more. please update soon, really like how this story is going . 
Tessa |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Tue Sep 06, 2005 5:09 pm
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I am loving this sequel. So happy she convinced Haldir to open up to her.
BTW, Chapter 5 seems to be repeated twice. |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Fri Sep 09, 2005 10:41 am
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| Thank you for the latest. We are still worrying about the visions; now Haldir is having them, too. More please. |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:55 am
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| Glad that she and the March Warden are on the road together. She is in so much danger from her weird relatives the trip could be difficult. |
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
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Thu Oct 20, 2005 12:56 pm
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| Where has she gone that it will take Galadriel to bring her back? Will this astral trip reveal to her more of her destiny or things she needs to know about herself? Thank you for the fast update. |
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Diddler07
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 34
Location: USA
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Thu Oct 20, 2005 1:22 pm
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Chapture nine is, to me, the best and most enjoyable chapture you've written for this story to date.
And I have to mention that your treatment of Orophin and Rumil throughout the story is really nice. Of course 'nice' doesn't really tell anyone much, but I seem unable to describe it any better. The brothers just seem so...normal/real.
Awaiting more....  |
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Daeuial
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: NYC
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Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:45 am
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| Oh, I wish I had waited and not read this so quickly! But I couldn't stop myself and now I've finished all the posted chapters. I have to go to bed all sad because lord knows what's happened to Ela now. I'm so caught up in this fic! You are an awesome writer, thanks for writing this fic so well, and no matter how long it is before it's updated, I'll still admire you for the story you've posted so far. |
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Tirananniel
Joined: 22 Jan 2006
Reviews: 13
Location: Imladris
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Sun Jan 29, 2006 2:31 pm
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| I must say it is just as enjoyable as the first, but your writing style has certainly mellowed in this story. I am quite happy to see that whoever betaed this stroy got the spelling correct! There are not quite so many insults this time, and few cute pictures like cute orcs and lullaby singing Haldir. I am anxious for the next chapters. Ela is a hook....a drug! You have gotten me addicted to a fictional character! Just as bad as Tess Gerritson, you are. |
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marykay
Joined: 06 Mar 2006
Reviews: 6
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Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:48 pm
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wonderful characterizations.
gripping plot.
outstanding stories! |
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