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rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Thu Apr 14, 2005 4:53 pm
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Nice beginning, look forward to reading more!  |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Thu Apr 14, 2005 7:54 pm
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| Charming beginning! Arien is precious, and I really enjoyed those peeks into her relationships with Thranduil and Legolas. It feels so happy in Mirkwood (lots of elflings, Arien bounding through the forest) ... I can only assume that this is a long time before the dark years. I almost don't want to see what the creeping shadow does to this bright little girl. But that, I suspect, is the story. |
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Sun Apr 17, 2005 9:35 am
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| Oh this is precious. If his heart melts any more for her, Legolas will be reading him the riot act about his little sister!! And since she is yet young, this story could last a while - goody!!! looking forward to more. |
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RunnerBeast
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: WA
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Thu May 05, 2005 5:00 pm
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I'm really enjoying this. I usually don't like stories with elflings, but this has really captured my interest and my heart. You write really well, I can't wait to read more!  |
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Radbooks
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
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Sun May 08, 2005 3:10 pm
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This is an enjoyable start to this story and I'm looking forward to seeing where it is headed... though I have a pretty good idea!  I hope to see a new chapter soon. |
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Fyalee
Joined: 15 May 2005
Reviews: 16
Location: South of Legolas, North of Haldir and all around Éomer.
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Tue May 31, 2005 7:02 pm
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I have a five-letter word, beginning with a B, and ending in H, simmering on the tip of my tongue ... What an evil little tramp to do such a thing! I do hope that Arien will be all right... Haldir to the rescue!
Although it's not canon, it's still enjoyable; what a place to stop the chapter though! This is a wonderful story, your writing is fluid and elegant and I simply adore the chapters you have put up so far.
Please continue writing this masterpiece and I will continue to review! |
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LadyBluejay
Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
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Fri Jun 10, 2005 4:07 am
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| Thank you for the story. I am enjoying it more with each chapter |
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Malinorne
Joined: 19 Feb 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Sweden
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 6:47 am
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Wow! There's really a lot of very dramatic things going on in this story, and it seems to continue, even after the lovers were reunited... poor Haldir and Arien! Illadris' malice goes beyond imagination and I can't say I'm sorry for her demise, even if she is a pitiful creature. I just hope Haldir will be able to free himself entirely from her influence and accusations!
As a fanatic Thranduil-lover, it was of course a delight for me to see him in this story, even as a minor character.
If I may offer one tiny piece of concrit, that would be to be more careful with the use of archaic words - there are several instances with mix-ups of words like "ere" ("err) and "naught" ("nought"). |
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Aearwen
Joined: 11 May 2005
Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 7:20 pm
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| Wonderful story! I still have to wipe the tears from my eyes. I hope you will post more of your great stories!!! Thank you for sharing! |
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Elfie
Joined: 17 Feb 2006
Reviews: 24
Location: North of Oz and south of Shangrila!
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Fri Feb 17, 2006 4:01 pm
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| I am not a Haldir lover, but when I read this story, I was caught by your words. Awesome. Poor girl! |
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