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desdemona888 Joined: 31 Jul 2006 Reviews: 1 Location: |
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I enjoyed your basic story-line but your ability to convey character emotion was what grabbed my attention. Your portrayal of Arien's grief was especially poignant. I'll admit, I am not a crier by nature but nonetheless tears slipped out as I read your last chapter. You might have lengthened out the final chapter a bit, her demise seemed to happen a bit quickly. However, it was an enjoyable read!
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