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Ania

Joined: 08 Sep 2003 Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Mon May 02, 2005 3:34 pm
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| There was a beautiful poignance to this, the ambiguity of it added to it immensly, leaving the elleth unnamed was a good choice, it was a thoughtful, simple and yet sensitively written vignette, very enjoyable to read, well written. |
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utfrog98
Joined: 10 May 2004 Reviews: 3
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Tue May 03, 2005 4:05 pm
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I would love to see more stories of these characters - the earlier Talen stories were outstanding. You certainly provided a new concept that has not beenn "overdone" and you are very skilled with words and images.
I do enjoy your writing and thank you for your work. |
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Thu May 05, 2005 12:19 am
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Bravo darling, bravo! Sweet and romantic end to the series. Or is it the end....  |
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mistybutterfly

Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: *tap tap tap* Hello, I\'m in your monitor. Can someone let me out?
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Thu May 05, 2005 7:24 am
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| Loved your saucy pleasure talan stories and this one is just so promising in the love department. Looking forward to seeing where this one leads. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Thu May 05, 2005 12:23 pm
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| I rather enjoyed this. It's sensitivity and subtle approaches when it comes to the elleth is sweet. ^_^ |
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Avaril
Joined: 08 Dec 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: Confusion
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Thu May 26, 2005 11:53 pm
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You already know how I feel about the "PLeasure Talan" But I wanted to stop by and say that I was most excited to see that you had made story of the day...well deserved...especially glad to see you have archived your stories here!
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:48 am
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Applause! This is great. Goes along nicely with the rest of the pleasure talan series. Sweet. Love it.
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