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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Sun Aug 27, 2006 5:26 am

First off, great story!

One thing, I don't think you ever explained why Legolas suddenly becamed beautiful. In the story, one minute he was hideous, and then suddenly beautiful. Was there a reason for the dramatic change?

Thranduil made me so mad. He abandoned his son when he was ugly, but as soon as he became beautiful he wanted to make it up with him. I thought Legolas had the right idea when he was angry, and I don't see how he could possibly forgive his father for that.

Despite that, I really loved your story. Well done!
 
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