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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Sun Feb 19, 2006 7:30 pm
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Great that you updated!
It's good that Eomer is warming up towards Lothiriel. But with Elfhelm, there is too much heat. I wonder if evil will come from that.
Thanks for updating! Nienor |
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 1:27 pm
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Beautiful chapter. I'm glad Lothiriel was finally able to get through to Eomer a bit. The trip to Minas Tirith and Emyn Arnen should be interesting. I wonder how Eowyn will handle her brothers condition, or if they will try to avoid telling her at all. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004 Reviews: 56
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Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:08 pm
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this is a wonderful story! How on earth you'll make things work out I have no idea, but you'll manage I'm sure. Good job, I'm impressed. |
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:30 am
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so ....... are we seeing a softening Eomer???
I sincerely hope so, after all his troubles I am desperate to see this poor man get some happiness! Lothiriel is growing much more likeable too now she has come to realise her earlier follies.
The baby was a lovely touch, I could easily visualise his chubby little face.
Excellent writing as ever! |
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derakh
Joined: 20 Jun 2003 Reviews: 20
Location: Salem, Oregon
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Thu Feb 23, 2006 5:45 pm
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Oooh, yay! A quick update! My favorite kind of updates.
Very well written as always. I like how you showed the relationship between Eomer and Aragorn. Hopefully Aragorn will be able to help the poor man regain some of his memories. And, for me at least, you're not moving too fast with the relationship between Eomer and Lothiriel.
Again, thanks for such a quick and wonderful update. I'm very much looking forward to the next one.  |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Tue Feb 28, 2006 8:38 pm
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| *does the update dance* Wonderful! I totally missed that you updated before, so I had two chapters to read :0P I love how Lothiriel and Eomer's relationship is progressing, it's very sweet. But I still feel for poor Elfhelm! Poor man... Oh, and I have to tell you, I was reading this after looking after my sweet but drooling niece, and I burst out laughing at the bit about Lothiriel and her nephew. Too cute (and true :0P) Wonderful job, I can't wait to read more!!! :0D |
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ShirePirate

Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: A lone island, location never to be disclosed
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Sun Mar 19, 2006 6:07 pm
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| I think that it is progressing at a perfect pace. Lothiriel really loves him and she is really trying to let him adjust in his own time. He loved her once with his entire being, and it is right that he will do so again...in time. I love how he is getting to really know her know. Keep bringing them closer. I am anxious to see what Aragorn has to say! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Tue Jun 06, 2006 3:32 pm
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Hmm, is the sinking in his stomach a good thing or a bad thing? That's what I'm wondering. I'm anxious to see how the relationship between these two will progress. I'm wondering how he will react to Lothiriel, a woman he seems to now be developing some type of feelings for, when he finds out the relationship that they had prior to his memory loss. This is such a great plotline! I love it!
Personally, I like that their progress is gradual - it would seem fake if it were too rushed.
Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope that you'll be able to update soon.
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Rosiegirl
Joined: 19 Jun 2006 Reviews: 10
Location: Australia
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Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:03 pm
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| What a lovely story thus far. Am enjoying it immensely. You write very well and capture emotions brilliantly. Look forward to seeing new chapters. Thank you for a great story! |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:48 pm
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| I am sooo glad that I was finally able to catch up on this story. Really, you're doing a wonderful job with their developing relationship. As always with this story, I am completely enthralled, and eager for the next chapter. This has really become one of my favorite stories. |
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