Reviews for "By the Sea"

Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:11 pm

*Screams in frustration* Ever seen that kids show "In Between the Lions"? There's a short in there every episode starring the Cliffhanger. Cliffhanger is a guy hanging off a cliff. AND I KNOW WHAT HE FEELS LIKE!!!!! You just love the drama and suspense, don't you?!?!?!!? Well, I can't really complain, since I'm enjoying it too, but I hope the next installment comes fast!!!

*Sings theme song to Cliffhanger short* "Cliff hanger, hanging off a cliff.....
And that's why he's called cliff hanger!"

(I still can't believe you made the baby stillborn I wouldn't smiley face

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Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:42 pm

*whimper* Poor Lotheriel!!! Made me cry!!! Such a good writer you are! I could never write because it would be all happy and predictable! That was the last thing I thought would happen! I honestly was hoping that Eomer would see her with the baby and remember who he is...you know....older....... Wow...how much more can that poor girl take! Oh please let there be some happiness for her and soon! Will be trying to wait patiently for the next update! Smile smiley face

Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:02 pm

Ahh! Wow, definitely great to see five chapters up for me to read! Smile smiley face

And all of them were great. The plot twist was almost expected, but the loss of the baby was not! Shocked smiley face

This is going to be very interesting, with Eomer acting as a child, and Lothirel trying to deal with the loss of the baby...great job!

Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:55 pm

With all of these, "evil cliffhangers," that you've been leaving us with, I *KNOW* that you have that "evil jig" down by now. Laughing smiley face

Whoa! I was *NOT* expecting for *THAT* to happen. I also thought that Eomer would recover in time for the birth. But it was not to be, and Lothiriel will have to go through this on her own... for the time being. So sad. Crying or Very sad smiley face

This story is addictive, and I can honestly say that I am hooked. Very Happy smiley face

I am always eager for the next update, but at the same time dreading it because it's one chapter closer to the end of the story. Confused smiley face

Anyhooo...great job! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Mon Jun 13, 2005 5:37 pm

Oh no, how sad Crying or Very sad smiley face

!

I hoped exactly the same as AranelMinyatur wrote, that seeing her with the baby would made him remember, but instead...
I just hope that somehow it gets right for the two. Shocked smiley face

Please post quickly!

nienor

Wed Jun 15, 2005 3:03 pm

i do hate you! look what you did! you zapped eomer into an eternal childhood and MURDERED a baby! ahh!!! dang it! you had better have another chapter up your sleeve...

da**it. I hate cliffhangers. Very Happy smiley face

well, just update soon, I guess.

angelica

Thu Jun 16, 2005 5:40 am

I have been enjoying this fiction for a couple of weeks now, and am always glad to see any updates. I have not found many Eomer fics that have held my interest,but this one is wonderful!! I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next. Poor Lothiriel!

Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:39 pm

Wow, what an original way to write about Lothíriel and Éomer's relationship! Wave smiley face

The beginning was very unusual, but after the initial awkwardness, I really enjoyed it. The love triangle with Elfhelm is marvelous (I must confess that you made me fall in love with him and my heart aches everytime I see his struggles and his sadness to know that Lothíriel will never return his affections :waah Smile smiley face

and Éomer's mind condition was a very good twist in the plot. And when everybody thinks that the baby was going to make everything right again, the poor thing dies. Another great twist. You put so much emotion in your characters, also creating such a solid background for them and their reactions to the situations happening in their lives. Each one has its own unique characteristics in a way that you can tell who is speaking in a dialogue without any reference to his or her name. I'm looking forward to see Éomer's recovery and to know how he is going to deal with Lothíriel and what is going to happen with my love Elfhelm. I hope the Mashall has a happy ending, because he has suffered enough already.

Until your next chapter! You rock smiley face

Sun Jun 19, 2005 1:55 pm

I did like this chapter. Seeing Lothiriel's depression and despondency, and then being shown the start of her recovery..... It's like I'll be waiting to breathe untill the next chapter! I'm really enjoying this! Honestly, your characters theem real! It's like watching close friends go through a tragedy. I've been teary eyed several times over the last few chapters. Great work!

Sun Jun 19, 2005 3:03 pm

What a chapter!! I can hardly express in words all that 's going through my mind......the loss of a child.....the near unbearable pain....no one should ever have to endure that. Very well written....I just wanted to hug her and then enters Elfhelm! Another character my heart goes out to! Again...very well written!! Lotheriel's reaction to his kiss was wonderful...so sweet!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!

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