Reviews for "By the Sea"

Sun Oct 30, 2005 12:51 pm

A chapter, great! Smile smiley face

I'm glad to see that this fic is going on, as I desperately wanted to see how it ends.

The tension between Lothiriel and Elfhelm is so well written, and it is a very unusual setting.

What of poor Eomer? If he comes back to normal some time, he will be so dreadfully embarassed of having been like this.

Thanks for updating, all the best to you!

nienor

Sun Oct 30, 2005 2:23 pm

Oh, an update! I had almost given up hope! *happy dance* Those poor people- I'm so excited to see how you will choose to resolve this story, how and if Eomer will overcome his memory, and how Elfhelm will fit into it all. I love it! Wonderful job, and keep up the good work! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:52 pm

an update at last!

and i will accept your biscuit as a token of your gratitude. Very Happy smiley face

still waiting for chapter fifteen, and goshdarnit, for eomer to get out of this little kid daze, because it would be a very awkward for elfwine to be conceived in this little bout of childhood from which eomer seems to be suffering.

still very high on sugar,
angelica

Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:12 pm

Yay! You're back! I'm so happy that you didn't give up on this story. Smile smiley face

This chapter was amazing! Can you say, 'sexual tension?' I could have cut it with a knife, I'll tell you! But I'm glad that she didn't give in to her urges. That would have been bad for everyone. Very bad.

When the scene with Eomer began, I had thought that maybe he had come out of it and was upset over her abandonment of him. Boy was I wrong! Mean old lady! Ha ha ha!! I have to say that I did get a good laugh off of him sayaing that. Very Happy smiley face

A very entertaining chapter! I'm very much looking forward to your next installment. Keep up the good work, and update soon. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Sun Oct 30, 2005 11:15 pm

I am so glad you did not abandon this. An interesting story, with an interesting premise and right now, you have me feeling VERY VERY sorry for Elfhelm.

Elfhelm needs a good woman... ah geez... you've set MY bunnies off.... back, back I say! I have enough bunnies!

Welcome back. I shall not say do not keep us that long again, as I have kept people waiting in the past and got rather PO'd when they pestered me. I do not pester.

***foot tapping***

Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:41 am

You ARE alive!! Very Happy smiley face

Just joking. Smile smiley face

But seriously, it's so wonderful to have an update!! I had almost forgotten about this story, but was so happy to see the e-mail in my mailbox telling me about the new chapter.

Very well done. I agree with the others, nicely done reaction on Lothiriel's part and thank you for letting her keep her dignity and not letting her give in to her desire. I also hope you can bring Eomer back soon. I hate having to see Lothiriel suffer by herself - not entirely by herself, with Elfhelm there and all, but Eomer's really the only one who can truly comfort her.

Again, thanks for the update and please don't make us wait so long next time. I mean, we will (judging by how many reviews have been added today alone), but we'd rather not. Wink smiley face

I'm looking forward to the next installment. Smile smiley face

Tue Nov 01, 2005 2:17 pm

Amazing chapter as always. love the tension between elfhelm and lothiriel! please update as soon as you can.

Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:22 pm

I'm delighted that you found some inspiration to write after my review! *smiles* I know the feeling you describe (and am in the throes of it now with my own GIGANTIC fanlit that I'm working on...) and I also know that sometimes a good review does the job. THIS CHAPTER: I can't tell you how heartbreaking it is to see Eomer like this, and Lothiriel too--I wonder if Arwen, Aragorn, or Elrond/Elrond's sons can help? Has Bilbo & co. left yet? I really hope that Eomer recovers soon (it's just too sad!). I thought that Elfhelm's first sight of her (last chapter, I believe) was especially poignant; your description of her was perfect. Also perfect was your tactful, sweet way of the Elfhelm/Lothiriel interaction. So precious! I hope you continue to write and well done!

Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:46 pm

I just began reading this story, and I love it. I'd really like to see more - please, more! Smile smiley face

Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:55 pm

That was close, really. I hope that Elfhelm really leaves, for what might happen if he didn't?

And travelling with a child-Eomer will surely not be fun.

But I fear more and more that he will be terribly embarrassed when he "wakes up". I hope you have mercy on him soon! Wink smiley face

All the best, nienor

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