Reviews for "Paradox of the Fourth Age"

Wed Jun 04, 2008 2:57 am

The wedding scene in the flashback was awesome Very Happy smiley face

I couldn't help but giggle at Elrohir's nervousness, but I guess everyone is at least a little nervous in such a situation. Then, Elladan's speech made me go like, oh my, so touching.

And they made it, YAY! But what is going to happen next? Please, don't make us wait too long, pretty please Very Happy smiley face

Excellent read, Al. Thank you for updating Smile smiley face

Wed Jun 04, 2008 11:07 am

Glad you "fleshed out" the details of the second marriage of the two Smile smiley face

I'm glad history has been corrected, but now I'm worried about her vision of one of the twins falling. Oh no! Now I"m very worried for her and for them! Please update soon! This is such a great story...

Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:29 pm

i am glad to be updated on this truly exceptional story. I admire how you have written it.

Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:52 pm

I will miss the flashbacks, you know, but I understand your decision Smile smiley face

Now that Laureanna and Elrohir are married, and reunited after the war, I am really curious just how you will have her explain to him where exactly she came from. He already got suspicious and angry, and she must keep her secrets, and now it's way harder to keep them, isn't it? As for Glorfindel, poor elf. I do hope he's going to find some peace at last, but I kind of feel you still have a few surprises for him up in your sleeve. Wink smiley face

I love Gimli in this chapter. He's such a jovial companion, full of mirth.

Lovely read, as always. Thanks a lot for updating Very Happy smiley face

Fri Jul 04, 2008 3:23 pm

I'm glad they are back together again - again. BUt I'm worreid about what Elrohir will do when he learns the truth and what he will do in his frustration that might hurt her while he waits for the truth. The dreams of Glrofy are interesting! I can't wait to see how everyone ends up getting together now! Another excellent chapter as usual. Can't wait for more!!

Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:58 am

Ah... now the subplot with Glorfindel needs closure. It's deftly handled, though. Will he recognize her in Minas Tirith, I wonder? Looking forward to updates, Alassante!

Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:45 am

Oh, many meetings, hmmm? Many very stresful meetings, I should add, because Laureanna was so nervous. And finally, she met her father! I can tell you that many 'what ifs' crossed my mind when I was reading this chapter. And I'm so glad to hear that your muse is back Smile smiley face

I look forward to reading the next parts Very Happy smiley face

Thanks a lot for updating, Al!

Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:31 am

*gasp* Indil arrived...?!

Poor Laureanna! I can't even imagine her inner turmoil that must have washed over her when she saw the elleth that was supposed to be her mother, that *was* once her mother. And the fact that Laureanna made her best efforts to draw Indil and Glorfindel closer to one another was equally touching, sometimes funny, but also oddly disturbing. I felt sorry for Elladan, as he did his best to catch Indil's attention, but Laureanna was always in his way. I'm glad that she had a good friend around to explain to her that she didn't act wisely.

Hehe, that mention of Aragorn's and Arwen's being late for supper had me giggle. This is one of the strongest advantage of your story, I think -- among many other things -- that even if a chapter is serious in tone, and explores the difficulty of Laureanna's relationships with her old and new family, you've never failed to bring a drop of humor and wonderfully mingled it with the seriousness. Erestor, for example, and the twins' bet. LOL.

Thank you tons for the update. As always, I'll be keeping an eye on the future ones.

(((hugs)))
Binka

Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:55 pm

Can I just say how much I love this? 'Cause I do. I've been following this story for some time ( but only now just reviewing. For shame >_< ) and I get excited every time I get an email saying there's an update.

More. Soon. Please.
Your story freaking rocks.

Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:57 am

You certainly know how to place a happy grin on my face Wink smiley face

After all the tension -- Laureanna's slip, Elrond's finding out the truth, and the farewell scene, you go and have Glorfindel and Indil kiss like teenagers behind a tree Very Happy smiley face

Thank you tons for the uptade Smile smiley face

Lovely chapter!

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