Reviews for "Paradox of the Fourth Age"

Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:08 am

Wow! What an amazing way to start the story! I'm certainly hooked now! I'm off to read the next chapter.

You did a wonderful job pulling the audience in. I liked the contrast of Glorfindel watching his daughter, and the happy picture you painted. You succeded in leading up to the darker mood as you recounted what happened in Middle earth. This is going to be a fascinating read, I can tell. I look forward to reading more!

Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:33 pm

Well, the Ring was destroyed, the war is over, but the intrigue continues, and in what a fascinating way! I wonder what you keep in store for Laureanna and her parents now, and I wish she hadn't looked into the mirror. What a cliffhanger!

Thanks for Haldir's appearance. I remember you promised to include him in your story Very Happy smiley face

and I *squeed* happily, hehe.

Great chapter!

Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:10 pm

Loved this chapter adn teh last one too. I was glad taht Glorfy and whatshername were finally getting together and this chapter we see they are planning to wed (YAY!). But now I am very worreid about Laurëanna. Her vision was a horrible one. You better update soon. The agony fo the situation is horrible enough for her, let alone your loyal readers!.
I love this story!

Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:33 am

Thank you for updating! Very Happy smiley face

And thank you tons for including Haldir in this chapter Very Happy smiley face

I like to see that he tried to help Laureanna and explained her the visions she saw in the mirror. I also like that you showed Galadriel's weaker side -- she was powerful, but sometimes vulnerable, and you portrayed her in a very belivable way here.

I'm looking forward to reading more. I love that your story keeps on surprising me. Thank you once again Smile smiley face

Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:56 am

Ah yes, tough choices indeed... I can't even begin to imagine what Elrohir must have felt, but you did an awesome job of taking a glimpse at his inner conflict between the love for his wife and the love for his sister. And what I found particularly touching and beautiful was his thought about Middle Earth -- that he belonged there more than he belonged in Aman. Very moving!

And I loved Glorfindel in this chapter, and his "inexplicable" concern for Laureanna and her pain. Smile smiley face

Great chapter! Thank you for the update, and I'm looking forward to reading more Very Happy smiley face

Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:58 pm

*gasp*

Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:59 pm

What have you done...? Sad smiley face

Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:03 pm

Now.... for a proper review...

Two chapters, but so different. Firstly, the new beginnings indeed: Laureanna and Elrohir's baby, Glorfindel and Indil's wedding. All seemed happy, though some shadows still lingered. And now this Sad smiley face

Heartbreaking.

What a turning point for everyone, especially for Indil.

I'm dying to see the next part.

Poor Glorfindel...

*sob*

Great story, Al. Thank you, and sorry it took me so long to catch up with the updates.

Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:16 am

OMG! Glorfindel! I actually had tears in my eyes. How could this happen to him. Sad smiley face

I hope he comes back to them soon. Surely there is something the valar can do.
I feel so emotional now! Your so good at this. I look forward to the next chapter.

Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:15 am

Wow, what a chapter! It leaves me craving for more. I hope an update is in the near future. Thanks...Daniel

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