Reviews for "Paradox of the Fourth Age"

Sat Sep 17, 2005 2:20 am

Oh what a wonderful chapter. I loved Glorfindel's banter about who actually runs the house; Laurëanna was quite a handful as an elfling, wasn't she? And what a gory detail of Helms Deep after the battle, very impressive. Like Laurëanna, I was a bit caught off guard by Legolas instant mistrust of her arrival (this is meant positively, a strong characterisation of Legolas), but I loved the way in which he slowly accepted where she came from. This bit made me cry: This world was so strange to her and she missed her family. This would be easier with Elrohir beside her. Biting her lip, she tried not to think about the night without him.

In every line, you write about her missing Elrohir: such a deep love shines through, it is so painful to read, and I can barely imagine how it must feel for her. The power of words: you have used it so well in dialogue, especially with Gimli. Ah and Gandalf: he doesn't miss a thing, does he?

A great read Alassante; it was most definitely worth the wait!

Mon Nov 07, 2005 3:14 pm

Okay, I finally get a chance to catch up on your story. I just love Laureanna! At one moment she is so unsure of herself, frightened and intimidated, but when it counts she steps up and succeeds. Then her treatment of Elrohir, he SO deserved it, and her! May I also commend you on your skills as a writer. this tale is even more readable than your previous works and you know how much I enjoyed them. Oh yes, more please!

Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:56 pm

Another great chapter! Loved the haughty bantering with Gimli and with the twins. Elrohir seeming to feel something for her was very sweet. I love the flashbacks and the dream in this chapter was chilling.

This is such an incredibly excellent story. Can't wait for more!

Tue Nov 08, 2005 1:40 am

Yay!

Another excellent chapter. I was so thrilled when you told me you were going to post it. And I'm even more thrilled now because this chapter is fantastic. I love the flashback at the beginning, and Laureanna's dream - so terrifying Shocked smiley face

What saddened me in particular was Glorfindel's statement that he had no daughter Crying or Very sad smiley face

I'm glad to see that she met Elrohir. What a promising meeting Smile smiley face

And I love Laureanna's conversations with Gimli.
Great chapter Al! As always, huge thank yous for updating. I'm dying to see the next one.

Binks

Tue Nov 08, 2005 6:30 pm

Yes, I agree with RobinKa--the flashback in this is GREAT and the dream is just plain terrifying. I've read it four times now and it still literally gives me chills. I really love this in M-e. Great chap!

Wed Nov 09, 2005 3:49 pm

Oh Alassante, just warn next time if your reader needs tissues. That conversation between Elladan and Elrohir, about Elladan pressing him to think of what would happen to him if Elrohir continued to be so reckless. *snif*

“You are right. It is a waste of time to lecture you. You are too stubborn to listen to anyone. If Glorfindel were here, perhaps he could beat some sense into you. Stop being so selfish. Naneth and Adar have lost too much to face losing you so stop trying to get yourself killed.” Angry tears filled Elladan’s eyes and Elrohir looked away to hide his own tears. “You are a fool but I…I need you. I cannot continue to live in this darkness without you by my side.” Crying or Very sad smiley face

But in current ME time... so many gems of dialogue. As Elliska and Binka said: the dialogue between Laureanna and Gimli LOL. But also the first meeting between Elrohir and Laureanna! Very enjoyable and sharp written, I just am so curious what will happen next and what Elrohir will do with that surge that passed through his feä. Thanks again Alassante, the next time I will make sure I have tissues nearby. Wink smiley face

Thu Nov 10, 2005 1:16 am

I love it. I can not wait to read more. When I get to the end of a chapter I am left to wander what will happen next for days.

Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:38 am

Thank you all so much for the reviews. I am glad you are enjoying this story as much as I enjoy writing it! I am working hard on the next chapter. Very Happy smiley face

Wed Dec 07, 2005 2:28 am

I told you I would leave a review for you once I was finished.... and now I am. I absolutely love this story! I was able to immerse myself into it, and I felt as if I knew Laureanna and everyone else. I was very nearly in tears several times, which doesn't happen very often when I read. Very well written, and absolutely captivating. I knew I put this on my recommended list for a reason, and I will recommend it to others as well.

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Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Dec 13, 2005 2:01 am

I think I told you this the other day. Every time I see another chapter of your story I go like *squeee* It wasn't different today in the morning when I got an update message Very Happy smiley face

This is fascinating chapter. The flashback, ah Al, I love the way you've mixed humor in the entire conversation between Indil, Thranduil's wife and others; lovely. So, Glorfindel let Elrond win the sparring...? Laughing smiley face

You told me you were uncertain whether to write Glorfindel and Indil together. It was such a romantic moment in the story.
I can see Laureanna and Elrohir's relationship is not going to be an easy one. But, I don't think she will marry Gimli in the end Wink smiley face

The most frightening moment was, of course, Laureanna's dream and Celebrimbor's death. I love to see you've worked a bit of the Noldor tragic history into the plot.
Amazing! I'm dying to see what is going to happen next Very Happy smiley face

Binks

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