Reviews for "Paradox of the Fourth Age"

Mon Mar 10, 2008 12:42 pm

The flashback scene was so sweet. But you know what I liked most about their moonlit romantic scene? No one ever said what I expected. And that kept me interested in the conversation. That's a talent indeed, when most romantic banter has been done and overdone. And the end ... oooh, is Elrohir sneaky! lol Keep going! You're on a roll.

Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:19 pm

Wonderful! Please update soon, I can't bear the suspense...

Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:05 pm

Please update soon. You have us hanging on the edge. I look forward to next chapter - with surprisingly little patience hehehe Smile smiley face

Excellent as usual!

Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:07 pm

Aah, I'm glad that the flashback, overall sweet and amusing (though I don't think Glorfindel would find it amusing, really Wink smiley face

), balanced the sadness and tragedy in the 'present' part so well. This is one of the many reasons why I love your story to bits -- you are doing an awesome job with bringing a wide range of emotions. The mood of this chapter, begun with a happy time for Elrohir and Laureanna, swayed to the opposite with Halbarad's death, to return to a somewhat lighter tone.

Wonderfully done, as always Smile smiley face

Thank you for updating. I'll be waiting for another installment Very Happy smiley face

All the best,
Binka

Thu Apr 10, 2008 10:03 pm

I love this story. Haven't had time to read this latest chapter yet, but look forward to it. I'm printing for when I have a few minutes here and there to read. This is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the brilliant work!

Big hugs to you!

Wed May 07, 2008 9:33 am

Chapter 17: LMAO. That opening bit, when they were discussing the house but it seemed very much that they were discussing something else: priceless! I love those flash-forwards, those sweet and carefree moments between Laureanna and Elrohir. I mean, I enjoy the war-time scenes, too, but in a totally different way. They don’t make me chuckle, and that is, I suspect, as it should be. “Fine. I will sneak out of my own house so my father does not find out that he talks too loud.” You know, a lot of authors – fanfic as well as published – try and fail to create spunky heroines. I think you’ve succeeded here. Laureanna is sassy without being annoying at all. Reading her is a joy. And you are mean, cruel, and ebol for ending the chapter there.

Wed May 07, 2008 6:32 pm

Okay, WOWWWWWW!!!Loved this chapter! I wasn't expecting Elrohir to stay with her at night let alone make the decision to do as he did at the end of the chapter! The chapter ended too soon, BTW. You could have covered the next 8 hours or so before ending it, ya know.

This story is so incredible. I can't wiat for more!

Fri May 09, 2008 10:34 pm

Reading this fic is bittersweet. I love when I get the email that there's another chapter to read - but I know another chapter means it's moving closer to the end of the story. I don't want it end! I love the way you combine the past and present in each chapter and weave humour into the tale.

Fri May 16, 2008 4:32 am

I love this chapter to bits! I'm glad that Elrohir found the courage to tell Glorfindel what he thought about the whole wedding thing. Plus I love the twins! They're admirable and as much as I do like your Elrohir I think that Elladan is equally adorable. And the opening part: LMAO! I didn't expect they were talking about the house! LOL!

As for the present part, it flows swiftly and I didn't even notice when I was at the end, and oh my! Please, don't make us wait too long for the next installment, pwetty please!

Great job, as always Very Happy smiley face

Thank you tons for updating.

Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:23 pm

YAY! You sooo make my busy crazy day much better when you post a new chapter! I can't wait to read!

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