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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005
Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
Mon May 30, 2005 8:01 pm
This is very well written, and an interesting premise. I'm definitely intrigued. Your writing style is so descriptive. I felt like I was right in the middle of the action. I'm assuming there is going to be much more to this. I hope so. I'll be watching this story. I'm interested to see where you're going with this. Great work, and update soon.
 
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shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: 
Mon May 30, 2005 8:26 pm
Very intresting and very descriptive; if I but closed my eyes I could have seen the whole picture.
I hope this story is not over it is very good! Razz smiley face
 
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cymrulady
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 10
Location: Wales
Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:09 am
Very descriptive and imaginative. You say it's in two parts, so I'm looking forward to the next. Well done.
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Thu Jun 02, 2005 9:15 am
Excellent!

Lots of action, intrigue and of course the best bit ... Haldir! Will DEFINATELY be watching this story Very Happy smiley face
 
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Thu Jun 09, 2005 2:44 am
Fianna!!!!!
I didn't know you were writing something as intriguingly winsome as this...I like it very much. Lot of smiles.
 
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:16 am
Fianna,
This was just absolutely fabulous!!!!!! I look forward to more, hopefully very soon. Your descriptions were so vivid, drawing emotion from me. Just WOW!!!!!

Banana smiley face

Talasi
 
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Jomitsui
Joined: 24 Dec 2003
Reviews: 29
Location: Singapore
Sun Jul 03, 2005 3:17 am
What a plot...what a description...what a story... Wow... nice.

Looking forward to read more of it. What agd work. Smile smiley face
 
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:46 pm
*is a puddle of goo*

Oh......my.............gawd!!! That was just.....GUH! I've not read anything this intense in quite some time. So hot, so beautifully written, and well orchestrated. I didn't want it to end, but it had to. Oh man. I need a cold shower now. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Hugs,
Talasi
 
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twilla
Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Reviews: 33
Location: Los angeles
Mon Aug 01, 2005 7:14 pm
I really enjoyed this story.
My favorite bit would have to be "I am a guardian and my life is yours.”
Uhg....made me feel so, well, SAD. Crying or Very sad smiley face
Thanks again.
twilla
 
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:44 pm
What a beautiful tale of trial and redemption; perhaps for both. Thank you for sharing.
 
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