Reviews for "Redemption"
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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Reviews: 34
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Thu Nov 30, 2006 10:19 am
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Truly beautiful story; would like to know what Haldir was feeling as he left at the end. Well-crafted story with vivid descriptions and good flow of action and re-action from the characters. You make Haldir seem quite the epitome of masculinity (don't know LOTR canon well enough to know who he is, but definitely want to meet him).
Warmest Wishes,
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PonytailGoddess
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Reviews: 30
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Thu May 24, 2007 1:17 am
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Woo...very hot. I enjoyed the story, though I wonder how the Maia will ever cope without her Eldarin sex toy. Perhaps she will be able to find another Maia in Valinor to entertain her fantasies...lol. Nice work. I really like how the elves got all suspicious. I would enjoy a sequel to this, if you made one...
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