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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Wed Jun 08, 2005 6:29 am

Very sweet. I like the little elfling's awe.
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:45 pm

I agree with picara--I love seeing the world through children's eyes. It is always a delightful and educational experience. Nice job.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:04 pm

Thank you both. I am hoping to write enough drabbles that I can just string them together and not have to actually work to finish my story. LOL No, I enjoy the little glimpses. They are quite a challenge.
 

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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:20 pm

Oh sweet... although I don't recognise the names, you capture the elfing's amazement with this delicacy. Simply beautiful!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:32 am

Thank you, all. This is just a glimpse of my fiction, "A Butterfly Effect-Chrysalis". Celebion is Haldir's son, and this is his first visit to Imladris, his mother's childhood home. The way it is described in the books, I just have to think that any elf seeing it for the first time would compare it to stories of Valinor.
 

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