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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:53 pm
This is very interesting work, Silvia, but it desperately needs an English-speaking beta. Still, some extraordinary elements come through - the idea of personal and political boundries, e.g., and passion so thick it's palpable. I think this could be first rate, but it needs a beta first.
 

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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Tue Jul 12, 2005 9:59 am
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Silvae

Joined: 28 Nov 2004
Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:48 am
I agree with Nancy - it's really nice (what an awful word! Sorry about that.) but it needs a once-over. Good job though!
Cheers,
Silvae.

PS : Nancy, I'm Silvae. This is Silvia. Don't insult the nice newbies. Rolling Eyes smiley face
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Thu Jun 30, 2005 11:26 am
I have to echo the other reviewers on the need for a beta, but other than that, this is an incredible piece. I relly like the writing style. You said more by ommitting the details than you ever could have by including them. Wonderful writing style!
 
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