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DreadLadyFreya
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
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Thu Jun 23, 2005 11:27 pm
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 How absolutely delightful! Poor Haldir, overwelmed by these strange customs of Men, but loving his new bride enough to try to embrace her culture.  I really enjoy this pairing & can't wait to read more of their story. |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Jun 24, 2005 2:17 am
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I'm so glad you continued your beautiful story by posting this adorable and funny glimpse at Eowyn's and Haldir's life together. I like especially how you portrayed Haldir from Eomer's POV (this strange elf-man, so common and humble, yet virtuous and valiant) 
Excellent challenge entry 
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rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:09 pm
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This was really good, and brought a smile to my face,
Excellent drabble! |
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SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Sat Jun 25, 2005 2:01 pm
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| I am now permenantly stuck with the image of Haldir chomping into an herbacious border. Lovely mix of humour and elegant language. |
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ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sun Jun 26, 2005 2:53 pm
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*Snort*  That was great, Eruanna. And it would be hilarious indeed. Well done! |
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Dee34
Joined: 28 Dec 2003
Reviews: 8
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:16 pm
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| This was so cute |
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ZeeDrippyVessel
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 95
Location: deep south
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Wed Jul 20, 2005 11:24 pm
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***snerk***
Too funny... I'll never get the picture of Haldir chewing on the floral arrangement out of my head now! |
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Aglarendis
Joined: 16 Jun 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Missouri
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Tue Aug 30, 2005 9:55 am
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Another Eruanna story? How did I miss this one? Hmm, this gives me a teasing taste of the more that I want!
This is a cute little vignette. Poor Haldir! This is certainly not meant to be a criticism. Humorous as the story is, I could not help but picture it from Haldir's point of view. You portray him as proud, yet very sensative. I wonder how he felt when he realized his mistake. Would he have felt embarrassed or humiliated? Or would his centuries of life have made him able to laugh at himself?
I have just one problem with the story. It is faaaaaaar too short! There are still so many questions that want answers. Obviously, Haldir does survive the battle to which he is going at the end of your first story. But what about his brothers? How long is it before he and Eowyn are back together again? I want a reunion story!!! Does Haldir become ill when he sees the meat on the table? If he and the other elves eat with their knives, how does Eowyn teach him to use a fork? Does he feel welcome in Rohan, or does he feel lonely except for Eowyn? There are so many things this unique couple has to learn about one another. What trials do they go through in order to make their marriage work? Can you imagine what a fight between the two of them would be like? With Eowyn's temper, I imagine it could be very... explosive. However, the make-up sceen could be Very... deep and interesting. Is Haldir still concerned about how he will survive when Eowyn dies?
Yes, I know I'm supposed to be reviewing Table Manners. It is a great story, but pleeeeeeeease give us more! |
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