Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:51 pm
I'm really liking this so far. You've got a great style and to me you portray Boromir and Denethor just as I'd imagine them. To see a Gondorian perspective on what's happening in Rohan too is really good.
Hoping to see more soon
SWxxx
Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon Jun 27, 2005 11:22 pm
"...the unmistakable bouquet of horse and unwashed soldier."
Dirty Boromir is *good* Boromir. Rawr.
I'm wowed by the silky flow of this narrative. It just slides me along, without pushing or pulling or making me wince. Scene invades scene moves to scene.
The only lingering question I had at the end was: Whose procession was that? Was the point that Faramir took on significant state responsbilities? Or will this be explained later in the narrative?
rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:45 pm
This was very good - you have me hooked and eager to read more
LadyBluejay
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:10 pm
Well done, extremely well written. I look forward to more