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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
Location: UK
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:12 am
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| Interesting. Imagination is a wonderful thing. Well done. |
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Ingole
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 36
Location: Washington State, USA
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:55 am
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OK, Shanalir, m'dear...
Where ARE you going with this? (Where ever that might be, I suspect Sir Ian would be chuckling over your shoulder in wicked delight.)
Giggles and mibs until more is unveiled...
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LadyofRohan

Joined: 02 Jul 2005 Reviews: 19
Location: The Plains of Rohan...er...Kansas
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:19 pm
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Oh, how funny! And it is even better that you are wrote in such short drabbles? Drabble, New word to me, but I imagine it takes more skill to keep it so short and sweet!  |
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shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004 Reviews: 24
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:54 pm
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It is extremly funny. I could barely pich myself off the floor to type this.
Though I also find it well written nice work  |
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:49 pm
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Wickedly funny, and not forced.
First, eww.
And second, Gandalf the Valey Girl, Like Oh My God!
Brilliant
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:02 am
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Very finely done. Not only you made him a girl, but a seuqking, squealing, OMG, like, I'm a girl, like I was an old man, y'a know girl.
Too, too funny. |
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LadyofRohan

Joined: 02 Jul 2005 Reviews: 19
Location: The Plains of Rohan...er...Kansas
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Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:10 pm
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I'm still picturing Dalfin squealing "Wheee!" riding Shadowfax down hills... I can't wait to see where you go from here since she won't give up an accessory Well done, very funny and well written. |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 11:56 am
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| Uhhh... frightened. That's it, I'm frightened. Mainly because I like it. Sort of like snapshots of the story, only with a valley girl. |
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LadyofRohan

Joined: 02 Jul 2005 Reviews: 19
Location: The Plains of Rohan...er...Kansas
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Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:38 pm
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| Very cute. I can't wait to see where you go with it next. I like the "pink" touch. |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Sun Jul 17, 2005 4:36 pm
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OK, stop begging! Here's one review at least.
Gandalf the Pink... I SEE it! The Golden Hall, beautiful colors (red, green, brown, gold) and in the middle of it all Dalfin the Pink screaming "Gotcha!"
I am quite sure this is the first Gandalf!Sue I've ever read (at least she talks like one).
Just continue this!
And it was really brave to enter this challenge. Noone else had the courage, I had not even the slightest idea what to write and you have already written 10 chapters.
You definitely have a wicked imagination. Take this as a compliment .
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