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scotchleaf
Joined: 22 Dec 2004 Reviews: 32
Location: looking over the mirrormere
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Thu Aug 25, 2005 3:34 pm
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Please update this soon i'm hooked already  |
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LaegelGreenleaf
Joined: 26 Aug 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Squaw Valley, Ca
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Thu Aug 25, 2005 11:01 pm
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scotchleaf said
> Please update this soon i'm hooked already 
This story got me hooked to. Keep up the good work. I'm loving it. hope to see the next chapter.  |
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Amalee
Joined: 29 Aug 2005 Reviews: 2
Location: Mt.Dora, Florida
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Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:27 pm
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I loved it! Well written and I can't wait to read more!
hugs,
Amalee  |
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LaegelGreenleaf
Joined: 26 Aug 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Squaw Valley, Ca
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Mon Aug 29, 2005 3:42 pm
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Very nice chapter. Poor Marigold for her rejection of you kin. I'm glad to see her father supporting her to escape. Letting her go to the elves. Great story. Keep up the good work. can't wait to see more.
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LaegelGreenleaf
Joined: 26 Aug 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Squaw Valley, Ca
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Tue Aug 30, 2005 6:19 pm
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ohhhhh! I hope she will find saelbador safely and her born to be child. Good work. well written. hope to see some more.
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LaegelGreenleaf
Joined: 26 Aug 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Squaw Valley, Ca
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 3:31 pm
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WOW! that was a great story. well done. and very sad that both Saelbador and Marigold had passed. that was very sad. made me tear up. great story. love it.
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 3:48 pm
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o h man how sad , both parents died i sure did have tears in myeye, this is A WELL WRITTEN STORY ,VERY GOOD JOB .
so what happen to the little guy now : :
pLEASE uP DATE SOON
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HLDana
Joined: 19 Feb 2006 Reviews: 3
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Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:56 pm
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I love this story... So sad but so wonderfully written!
Thank you for sharing this here!
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:31 pm
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| This can't be the end?! The ending had a question mark to me as if there is more to the story. Please do not leave it there. Please finish this wonderful story. At least give the baby a happy ending even though his parents had none. |
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