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Tylany

Joined: 07 Aug 2005
Reviews: 14
Location: Stuck in a daydream.
Fri Sep 23, 2005 4:57 pm
This is an interesting story, I wonder is it over yet? I hope not It was a bit hard to follow with the romance part. Your story sucks the reader in and yet not so you feel there yet you also feel in the normal world. Very odd feeling if you have never felt it before. I thought it amusing When Tyrian showed Linden that he had a father, and who his father. Nicely written as well I did not notice many if any grammar or spelling erors. Good job! Razz smiley face
 
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