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Clue
Joined: 19 May 2004 Reviews: 6
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:43 pm
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| I enjoyed the first chapter very much and I do hope you continue with the story. |
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twilla
Joined: 27 Jan 2005 Reviews: 33
Location: Los angeles
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:53 pm
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I'll be watching this story, I love your writing style.
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Reviews: 66
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Wed Oct 05, 2005 6:53 pm
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| Another very good chapter. I feel so sorry for Legolas and his incredible pain - especially after so many thousands of years. Well done. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Oct 07, 2005 11:33 am
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A very impressive start I really enjoyed these two chapters. Very well written. I like your writing style. Good job, Neni I'll be watching this.
Thanks
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
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Fri Oct 14, 2005 8:14 pm
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You are including an impressive list of elves here - now if only Glorfindel or Gil-Galad could go! I'm sure they won't be, but they are my favorite elves so I had to mention them. Even though it was a short chapter, it was necessary for us to meet Haldir (I like how you write him.) and I liked your descriptions of where they lived and how Galadriel had influenced it. Looking forward to more. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Oct 15, 2005 3:04 am
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Glad to see another chapter! Oh, and glad to see that my favourite warden of Lorien is going to take part I like the way you write him and Rumil.
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:10 am
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Yes! Another chapter! But what is the purpose of their going? I'm all curious! You must update or I shall cry!  |
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:20 pm
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Hmmm. A rather intriguing premise. I like it.  |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:08 am
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| I have read the first chapter and I am very interested Please dont be another author who begins something really good and just walks off! |
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