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Sirannon
Joined: 04 Jan 2005
Reviews: 24
Location: Denmark
Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:20 pm
This drabble raises a lot of questions, such as "what is Legolas doing at a hospital?" Is this a modern day fic? I'm a bit confused. Maybe you should make a story out of it to explain things more thoroughly. Right now there's a lot of questions left unanswered and they distract me from truly apreciating the theme of the story. The feelings of the distraught wife when her husband is injured is a very compelling theme, however.
You are definitely on to something interesting here.


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Last edited by Sirannon on Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:05 pm
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Mon Oct 17, 2005 7:13 pm
I must admit my confusion about Legolas being in the hospital. Also, you have this marked as a drabble yet its alot more than 100 words but less than 200 words. Confused smiley face
 
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