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isilelensar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 61
Location: SE Tennessee
Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:36 pm
Well, I can certainly see this as being an Eowyn/Faramir moment, certainly, and being interrupted by a very jealous horse... Wink smiley face

Well done! Thanks for sharing!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:26 pm
Well, okay, but it is Ela and Haldir. Same premise. I can see where it would be confusing, without the surrounding story. I am glad you liked it.
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Sun Nov 06, 2005 2:23 am
Taken as a drabble, half the time I don't even know who I'm writing about until I'm finished. I thought this was clever. I don't know if you meant to do the double, "He found," and that gave me a moment's pause, but all in all, I think I like horse drabbles.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sun Nov 06, 2005 7:55 am
Okay, you got me ghetto. I did not mean to do that. This is cut down from a much longer passage in the story. I have found that is much harder than just writing the durned thing to begin with. I found another doubled word and fixed that also. I hope this is a bit better. Thank you.
 
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