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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004
Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
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Thu Nov 17, 2005 10:53 pm
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| How very sad. I have been reading this story for a while. Can't remember where I first saw it. It is beautiful and sad. You have caught Hadlri's grief so very well. How empty and how very sad. *sniff sniff* |
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Diddler07
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 34
Location: USA
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Fri Nov 18, 2005 1:40 pm
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I read this before on another site and really enjoyed it. Your version of Haldir's death was such a surprise and very moving.
Looking forward to move of your work.. |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:44 pm
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| That was a really beautiful story at least Haldir got to be with his love in the end> |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:44 pm
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| That was a really beautiful story at least Haldir got to be with his love in the end. |
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TheLadyofLight
Joined: 29 Nov 2005
Reviews: 1
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Mon Nov 28, 2005 11:02 pm
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Haha! I found it!
I adore the revisions you have made. Particularly, the tattoo sequence and the discussion of the fear of death--and a life devoid of love. That was simply beautiful and wonderfully eloquent and touchingly real.
Kudos to you, Oboist! May the small, yet loyal, following of true Haldir stories grow!
Cheers!
~The Lady of Light~ |
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Diddler07
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 34
Location: USA
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Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:08 pm
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//... Particularly, the tattoo sequence and the discussion of the fear of death--and a life devoid of love. ...//
Thank heavens there was mention of revision! Good grief, I almost missed this. The first version was very, very good I thought, but now having read this one, I find this one is tighter, deeper - just wonderful. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Dec 03, 2005 8:36 pm
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Beautiful story.
So tragic and heartwrenching, yet hopeful and romantic. I definitely needed the kleenex for this one. I can't put into words exactly how I felt while reading this story. I think what really touched me, deeply, was the loss of their peaceful togetherness - the loss of that one person that brings total and complete peace to your life. Very tragic. Very sad.
In the end, when Haldir knew what was happening, I knew that he was happy to be leaving. I knew that he would finally find peace again.
Wondeful, wonderful story! Thank you so much for sharing.
Michelle... |
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LydiaB
Joined: 19 Nov 2005
Reviews: 68
Location: Russia
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Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:31 pm
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Lovely story.
I particularly liked your Haldir; he was a very well developed character with a softer side and hidden fears. Also enjoyed the dialogue, which flowed very nicely.
So, thanks from a diehard Haldir fan. |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:58 am
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| Such a beautiful story. |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:45 pm
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| This was... Well, I'm at a loss for words now, frankly. This was heart-breaking. Sad and beautiful. And well written. Thank you very much for sharing. |
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