*gasp* Aragorn without Arwen?! You're too cruel! - but I know you're right. He would choose another, a noblewomen of the Gondorian court to continue the ever-lessening line of the blood of Numenor.
Diddler07
Joined: 28 Sep 2005 Reviews: 34
Location: USA
Sat Dec 10, 2005 3:34 pm
Oooooo. Interesting. And coldly bitter (Aragon's sentiment!) in a way: "...the one I once named father who dangled her before me as my price only to keep her at the end. "
I love it.
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Sun Dec 11, 2005 2:23 pm
Very bittersweet and you capture his emotions extremely well. The loss and despair, then the determination not to be bested. Well done!