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Khamul
Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Tue May 30, 2006 10:19 pm
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| I joined this site only recently, and I'm thrilled to have found this story here! I'm a fan who checks often to see if your story has added a new chapter, and I read it eagerly. I just have to say, good job, you both, and I await the next chapter! |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:22 am
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Great new chapter, Angmar and Elfhild!
Business lesson, indeed! 
Also, I must note that the Gondorean girls are "hotter" than I thought them to be.  I would have expected haughtiness and contempt and deep depression on their part. Or are those two carefully selected?
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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 80
Location: All of Arda
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Wed Jun 07, 2006 5:25 pm
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Khamul,
Glad you are enjoying the story. Rhûn will be one of the countries which will not be overlooked in this story.
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Agan,
If Gondor is to be a realistic country, not all Gondorians are of the highest virtue or of the strongest character. These two women could have been prostitutes or loose women in their native land. In this chapter, we have explored the phenomenon of falling victim to the captor/captive relationship.
To understand this chapter, I highly recommend the reading below:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Capture-bonding
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stockholm_syndrome
A lot of this story will be dedicated to the slow brainwashing and programming of prisoners.
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:46 pm
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A very nice chapter this "Unwelcomed Edict" - quite captivating.
Poor Elfhild can never keep her eyes off foreigh men.
Interesting, what will happen next... |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
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Thu Jun 22, 2006 12:05 am
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Ooo...very interesting. It looks like Elfhild is having an attack of the blame-game, as it were.
I'm almost afraid to ask what will happen next... 
I do look forward to reading more, tho. |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:13 pm
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Nice new chapter!
But if the slaver will choose himself three different women every night he will soon spoil all his merchandise... Or he will leave the virgins alone? |
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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 80
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Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:22 pm
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"Poor Elfhild can never keep her eyes off foreigh men." - Aganuzir
And men can never keep their eyes (and often their hands) off pretty girls.
"Ooo...very interesting. It looks like Elfhild is having an attack of the blame-game, as it were." - HeatherRae
HeatherRae, I thought maybe it was a case of "the lady doth protest too much." Even if she won't admit it, you know she must be flattered by all the attention.
"But if the slaver will choose himself three different women every night he will soon spoil all his merchandise... Or he will leave the virgins alone?" - Aganuzir
No spoilers.
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 12:21 am
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| I have SUCH a bad feeling about this. lol. |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Tue Jul 04, 2006 2:42 pm
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| I share your feeling, Heather Rae. No way they would be able to escape. They are Doomed... |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Sun Jul 23, 2006 4:27 pm
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Very nice new chapters, Angmar and Elfhild!
Smoke-breathing dragon was hilarious and the Southron customs quite unexpected by the poor rohirric women.
Now, what does the evil slaver really want, and why did he take the children along? Hmm... |
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