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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 80
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Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:55 pm
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HeatherRae, I think the bad feelings are not going to lessen, but rather intensify. 
Aganuzir, the Rohirrim have never experienced anything like the waterpipe, and in their state, they would believe anything.
You can be sure the slaver has plans for those three boys.
Now think clean here, everyone!  |
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Khamul
Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:18 pm
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Goodness me, how could you be so cruel to leave us all hanging!?  I simply must know what happens to Goldwyn and her sons!
I've grown quite fond of her, -and- her sons. I have to know what happens. I can't wait until you've installed the next chapter. Excellent job! |
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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 80
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:08 am
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Khamul, don't worry about the multiple posts. Accidents happen. If you want to, you have the option of deleting the extras or editing them - just go to the page of reviews, find your duplicate, and then click "delete."
It does look dark for Goldwyn and her sons... you just couldn't believe how dark it might get.
Just wait for the next chapter.
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Khamul
Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Thu Aug 03, 2006 11:43 pm
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I have to believe that those eyes belonged to something...maybe it was a vision?
Hrm...you left me hanging.
Again. 
Good work.
I await the arrival of the next chapter. |
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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 80
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Sat Aug 05, 2006 4:35 pm
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The story has just been updated with a chapter by Elfhild.
The eyes won't be explained for a few chapters yet to come, but they will play a big part in the story. There will be many more cliffhangers in the future. |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
Reviews: 94
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Mon Aug 07, 2006 10:31 am
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Great new chapters, Angmar and Elfhild!
Yes there are real cliffhangers... I see Aeffe is a sensible young women. I hope Leofgifu would prove so too. As for the twins... hmm... I won't choose to be in their place when they are caught. |
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:17 pm
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Nice new chapter. Thank you for updating. Great description of Goldwyn's new clothes. 
Still don't see why the slaver wants her children to dine with him as well... |
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AngmarAndElfhild
Joined: 18 May 2005
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:18 pm
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Aganuzir,
Things don't look at all good for the sisters, or, sadly to say, very many of the others. Everyone will have to wait and see what happens.
Elfhild thought that it was perhaps time for a new clothing style to be introduced into the southern part of Middle Earth. Tolkien never told us anything about the clothing worn by civilians of Harad. In this, imaginations have to be used, with maybe a reliance upon what was commonplace in ancient civilizations around the Mediterranean, or, for that matter, more modern ones.
What the slaver wants with Goldwyn and her children will be revealed in the next chapter. No hints.
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Aganuzir
Joined: 31 May 2005
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Sun Aug 27, 2006 4:34 am
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Great last chapter (19), Angmar and Elfhild. 
I really enjoyed Esarhaddon's story: very realistic. So the slaver was only being kind to the children...It must be dawning more and more on Goldwyn and sons that the Haradrim are not so very different basically from the men of the Mark.
So there are frequent plagues in Nurn...? Couldn't the Dark Lord do something to protect his subjects? Or is he only good at causing plagues, not at stopping them? 
Thank you for the new chapter,
Agan |
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Khamul
Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:43 am
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Suspensful ending for the last chapter. Good character building on Esshardon, as always. I felt a slight sympathy towards him as he was explaining his dead wives and children. 
" So there are frequent plagues in Nurn...? Couldn't the Dark Lord do something to protect his subjects? Or is he only good at causing plagues, not at stopping them? "
Well, I might be totally off the mark here, but I myself think he dosen't really care much about them. Plauges are good population control, and besides, in Book One, he didn't agree with Angmar concerning trade of Rohirrim captives for the Easterlings and Southrons. Not even for the Khandish prince! So, I don't understand why he'd care for the commoners. Good question though Aganuzir. I guess we'll have to wait for Angmar and Elfhild's take on it. |
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