I love this; it's not really common to read of the Valar engaging in less than savory behavior towards anyone... but you used it as a perfect plot twist. Poor Melian...
Also, Fëanor <3
MrsAnalytica
Joined: 24 May 2013 Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
Thu Jun 20, 2013 11:24 am
This was a beautiful story... I'm stunned it doesn't have more reviews, really. Your characters and scenes were all very well written, and your storyline one of the most original I've read so far. I felt so bad for them all...