Reviews for "Love conquers Everything"

Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:14 am

Interesting concept - a love square instead of a triangle. However a BETA would really help the story flow easier. I don't know if it is a convention of your first language, and if so I apologize, but I can not find your spelling of Eywon anywhere. Tolkien spelled it Eowyn (of course i can't put in proper accents).

It has all the elements of a very good story, told from a very talented and imaginative writer. But if I were you I would ask for a BETA - it would only help. You can ask for one on this site in the Forum Index; there is a Topic of BETA NEEDED and you can request one there. Can't be sure you'll get one and if not perhaps you can run a computer document checker program on the next chapter.

Mon May 08, 2006 5:43 pm

this is briliant, and i will certanly be waiting for upcoming chapters. im such a sucker when it comes to Aragorn and Arwen... i dont like eowyn at all though *sticks out tounge* this is EXACTLLY what i think she is doing ALL the time. as i said in a post on ur other story, typos dont bother me. im a BAD speller. its a wonderfull story so far and i cant wait for the next chapters. Very Happy smiley face

Sun Oct 08, 2006 8:08 pm

You are doing wonderful with the story.

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