Reviews for "After the End"

Thu May 11, 2006 7:45 am

Wow, tough time and subject matter Ottis, but very well done. I see that you're not pulling any punches and I appreciate the historical accuracy. I'm also enjoying your characterization, I like that your good people do 'bad', and that we have glimpses of goodness in the baddies. I'll be interested to follow this along. Becky

Thu May 11, 2006 3:57 pm

Otis, good job with a difficult topic. I am interested to see the outcome of William's confrontation with Saruman. I will be watching this story.

Mon May 15, 2006 4:06 pm

Awesome story. Very unusual and captivating. Please, post more! I will follow this for sure.

Wed May 17, 2006 4:19 pm

A little creepy, and unique. Loved it. In Chapter 5 itself is hinting on the fact that Kenneth killed Mark. Hrmm... would like to read more!

Wed May 17, 2006 10:09 pm

That was great.

Very, very good. Smile smiley face

Wed May 17, 2006 11:10 pm

Uhhh.... double wow! (LOL!) What a fabulous job you've done with this. I really enjoyed it.

Thu May 18, 2006 1:27 am

How delightfully captivating, depressing, and dark. Not the usual ff fare. I think you are ready to graduate.

Thu May 18, 2006 7:53 pm

Ottis, this was an outstanding psychological study of complex characters. I don't know if you are planning a sequel to this story or not, but a follow up on William would be great. Hope you do more sci-fi/Middle-earth combo stories in the future.

Fri May 19, 2006 12:15 pm

Well, this is a concept I have rarely seen before.

You manage to convey William's psychological state really well without letting it be melodramatic. That he looks at all what happened in such a detached way shows how much went wrong in his development due to the terrible situation he grew up in.

Very good! Nienor

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