Reviews for "Weakness"

Tue May 23, 2006 10:17 am

Ohh very sexy Vilwarin! The longing and feeling of guilt is so tangible through your words. Aragorn knows he shouldn't do this, but oh the temptation.... Thanks for sharing!

Tue May 23, 2006 1:19 pm

I'll echo Rhaps by saying that this was a very well done depiction of forbidden passion and a great choice of topic for this challenge. Very insightful. Thank you for sharing.

Tue Oct 06, 2009 2:49 pm

Very nice drabble... you have been able to capture in very few words the tension between honor and desire, the lure of temptation, and the consequent shame that comes with the breaking of vows. You have also presented a very humanized view of the seemingly perfect Aragorn. Perhaps the most intriguing aspect of the drabble is the nameless stranger that lies with him. Leaving her nameless allows for an allegorical interpretation of Temptation... something everyone (even the most noble) is bound to feel sooner or later.

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