Reviews for "Shopping with Grima and Saruman"

Tue May 23, 2006 3:47 am

Very clever ficlet. Now, for a twist of irony, I sat down to read this story with a dish of icecream in hand (Dutch Chocolate). I do have to say though that imho, the greatest torture of all icecream flavors has to be pistachio. Puke smiley face

Favorite line: "Unfortunetly, they couldn't find the same brand of warg food that they used last time, but Saruman didn't think the wargs would mind. If they didn't like the food, they'd just try to eat the nearest orc they'd find. That was a good way of eliminating weak orcs."

If I might offer a suggestion: stopping by the "beta pool" in the forums and finding someone to beta read (edit) for you may help with errors like misspellings and homophone misuse (in one place I noticed a 'to' where a 'two' was needed). Unlike the pet fish type, our betas don't bite. Smile smiley face

Again, fun ficlet. Thank you for it.

Very cute piece. I enjoyed it.

Wed May 24, 2006 9:32 pm

Ahh, now I have to buy some ice cream, (Cookies'n cream, my precious!) Bounce smiley face

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