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Erestorslove
Joined: 19 Feb 2006
Reviews: 10
Location: Himring
Sun May 28, 2006 3:09 pm
Aearwen! You did it again! Was the muse kissing you?

I have tears down my cheeks, you made my day! Love Saelbeth and Thandronen and could see them freak out!
 
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Elfie
Joined: 17 Feb 2006
Reviews: 24
Location: North of Oz and south of Shangrila!
Sun May 28, 2006 3:12 pm
There we go. I have not been online in weeks and what do I see! An update out of your humour drawer. Great! You made those elves suffer as we do daily! I dare say, I will never volunteer to call Imladris! Was nice to see this!
 
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cymrulady
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 10
Location: Wales
Tue May 30, 2006 7:43 am
Aearwen, this is fabulous! I can't think what mood your muse was in when he inspired this but well done to you both! Very Happy smiley face
 
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HLDana
Joined: 19 Feb 2006
Reviews: 3
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Tue May 30, 2006 9:23 pm
ROFL smiley face OMG! I can't stop laughing!!! Very good job! Very Happy smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed May 31, 2006 2:40 pm
Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face

Okay, this was damn funny! ROFL smiley face

Beer smiley face


LOL
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:25 pm
This is just wonderfully written Aearwen, I just love how you mix our daily lives with that of our elves and make their frustration that they experience about impenetrable hell desks Wink smiley face And this all in such a delicious mixture of humor and great dialogue. Thumb smiley face Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face You rock smiley face
 
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Ottis413

Joined: 01 Oct 2005
Reviews: 21
Location: West Virginia, USA
Fri Jun 02, 2006 10:39 pm
ROFL smiley face Doh! smiley face ROFL smiley face ROFL smiley face Bounce smiley face Crazy smiley face ROFL smiley face ROFL smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:29 pm
I can so relate to this. I loathe voice menus. And, I can see the normally complacent losing it totally.

On the other hand, I can honestly say that this needs work. The humour is there, but the grammar is not. If I understand correctly, you hail from Germany. You need an English-speaking friend to go over this with you. You have used some words incorrectly and puncutation needs attention.

I have the utmost respect for anyone tackling English as a second language. It is my understanding that it is the most difficult to learn do to lack of grammar rules, and just up and forgetting those that exsist.

Thank you for sharing.

Rous
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:01 am
Caught this on the story of the day. It is still extremely funny and worth the read. However, the tense deviations are still an issue. But, since this person has not visited since 2007, I do not see any changes coming. Too bad; this is worth the work.
 
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