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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed Jun 28, 2006 5:48 pm
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what a delightful beginning.
It's typically OOC for Elves to be un-graceful, but i know it's fun to play with and you've done a skillful and enjoyable job with it.
I love this line. >“So please explain it again, how on Arda you fell to the ground from the ground?”
how very much like a brother. 
I don't have time for all the chapters today, but I've bookmarked it and look forward to catching up with you later. |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Thu Jun 29, 2006 3:00 am
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Oh, I like this one! I look forward to seeing more.  |
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Fri Jun 30, 2006 3:23 pm
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I like this a lot! I find Caerali's klutziness to be very endearing, and I can definitely relate. And I like how you're written Glorfindel. He's kind of a jackass, which is amusing to me. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for an update  |
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Siladan

Joined: 07 Sep 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: dreaming on the beach
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 3:15 pm
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| What a great beginning!! There are not enough stories of Glorfindel and I love the way you have written him.... just a bit cocky and arrogant, but with enormous amounts of sensuality under control (my kind of guy, lol). Thanks for sharing. |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:25 pm
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I love this story and your other one too, I like the way you portrayed Glorfindle,kinda of an hilarious ass in a way, I like the way hes always getting tripped up by her ,I guess we will see how this ends cant wait Please Update  |
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Hermit

Joined: 22 Aug 2006 Reviews: 7
Location: Lost
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Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:44 pm
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| I simply love this story. It is adorable! And it does help that Glorfindel is one of the main characters. I absolutely adore him. ^^ Wonderful work, though I was a bit saddened with the lack of....*cough* action, if you get my meaning. But other than that lovely job. |
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