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Caz
Joined: 20 Apr 2006 Reviews: 6
Location: UK
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Sun Jul 02, 2006 2:38 am
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Oh, please, please continue this!
Excellent! Best I've read for a looooooong time.
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 9:06 pm
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Beautiful. I would love to see you expand upon this. I think it could be a really amazing story and definitely not your typical Legomance. Thank you for sharing this.
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:42 pm
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I like it. =) This could really be something, so get on with it will ya  |
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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:18 pm
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That was amazing. Truly, it was. As others have requested, you should expand on this story. I know I would follow it.
Your writing is fantastic and lovely and the fact that you created a character who has a speech impediment and a facial deformity is not something I have seen before in any other story.
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006 Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
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Wed Aug 16, 2006 11:29 pm
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| That was such a beautiful story! I have never read a story before where the love interest of the character was deformed. It sent a really great message. I agree with everyone else, you should definately continue this. I know I would certainly read it. |
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NierielRaina

Joined: 05 Sep 2006 Reviews: 40
Location: Texas
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:36 pm
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LOL! That was great! Very nicely written! Bravo!
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 3:49 pm
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Lovely, thoughtful, well written I liked this story a lot. Thank you for sharing. |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:49 pm
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| wow that was great! But it feels like there is more to it. |
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