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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006 Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:45 pm
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| Very lyrically written. And I am not referring to the subject matter. Nice writing style, intriging story line. Will be looking for following chapters. |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006 Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:47 pm
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| Very lyrically written. Nice style and intriging story line. Will be looking for follow on chapters. |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Sat Jul 08, 2006 6:55 pm
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This is a very lovely story please do keep going, I would love to see what happens.  |
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
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Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:17 pm
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What a fascinating story! Very lyrical and nicely flowing and the emotions of the sea are wonderful, too.
I loved this line: “I do not –frolic.” I replied tersely, “I merely… step rather lightly.”
Keep up the good work and update soon! |
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Sirannon
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Reviews: 24
Location: Denmark
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Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:23 am
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| This can turn out to be a wonderful story. It is very beautifully written and the two different narrators have a voice of their own. I'll be looking forward to where you are taking this. |
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
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Mon Oct 30, 2006 12:42 pm
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This was a wonderful chapter adn the ending was beautiful! Well done! Enjoying this tale very much!
Keep up the good work! |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Wed Jan 10, 2007 7:19 pm
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| Wow, I'm loving it. Please please update soon! |
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
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Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:36 pm
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| So she's an elk now! What a wonderful dialogue with Ulmo. She is so very sweet and innocent and if I understood correctly, she unwittingly saved Glorfindel. I hope those two get together. This is such a nice story. Looking forward to more! |
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Reviews: 21
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Sun Jan 28, 2007 5:50 pm
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| I absolutely love this story! Please, please update again soon! I can't wait to read more--especially of Merlasse/Linneniel and Glorfindel together! |
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