Reviews for "Friendship is Precious"

Thu Jul 13, 2006 10:33 pm

This is a very well written story. The only think I'm confused about is that it seems to end too soon. In the story Aragorn tells Legolas to read the letter to find out how Eldarion was killed which implies that there's more to the boy's death than just the war but it's never elaborated on so it seems to cut off too soon. Another thing that makes it seem to cut off too soon is the fact that Aragorn asks Legolas f he knows something Aragorn doesn't know, but it doesn't seem to expand much on that. But other than those things I really liked the story.

Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:25 am

Beautifully written. I loved it, it was so sad! I agree with the comment made by Meriadoc that it seemed to cut off too soon. Also, there were several minor grammatical errors. For instance, at one point you wrote 'came' where it should have been 'come'. Aside from these little nitpicks, it was beautiful and I absolutely loved it. Well done!

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Reviews for "Friendship is Precious"