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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:17 am
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| Wow! All I can say is: MORE! *g* I've finally caught up with some of the chapters, and re-read those that I read too fast the first time. Brilliant. Am looking forward for more *thumbs up with a huge grin* |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:52 pm
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  poor porr Legolas...poor girl... what are we to do? |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Sep 10, 2006 5:30 am
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| oooooo my......nooooo...Elaine, WHAT are you doing?? poor thing...poor Legolas...argh....*bounces and waits for next update* |
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sofia
Joined: 28 Mar 2004
Reviews: 78
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Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:44 pm
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didn't notice how long the chapter was until you mentioned it in your author notes. Though of course, reading it, it didn't seem that long, or at least to me it didn't.
AHA! there's our shared idea- the waterfall. Though I like how you had yours be a picnic in there. How sweet.
The sexual tension... let me say that was a very well written almost-sex scene in there. It was steamy and OMG worthy. Can't wait for the next update.
Hugz and Kisses! |
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snoewhite
Joined: 23 Aug 2006
Reviews: 2
Location: elven realm
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Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:56 pm
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| I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue, I'm hopelessly hooked. |
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ElennaElemirre
Joined: 08 Mar 2005
Reviews: 22
Location: East of the great sea
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 1:31 am
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oooh this i like. I've seen this story couple times since the summer but never got around to reading it. But yes, it is very nice.
It reminds me somewhat of a story i read about a girl who fell in love with a selkie, the book's called "Seven tears into the Sea." But in the story the heroine met the selkie when she was a young girl and then saw him again in a cave by the seashore and fell in love, etc.etc. That was what your story totally reminded me of.
Anyways, lovely concept of a story. Keep it up! |
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maidenofthebattle
Joined: 26 Mar 2006
Reviews: 9
Location: US
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Fri Sep 22, 2006 11:41 pm
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| This is cruelty! You keep us hanging at the end of each chapter! *grin* But this is coming along beautifully! Hurry and post the next chapter... |
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sofia
Joined: 28 Mar 2004
Reviews: 78
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Sat Sep 30, 2006 6:58 pm
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| well... although I understand totally why you would do this (I'd most likely do it too, to be honest) I have to go "OH COME ONNNNNN!" When Elaine pushes Legolas away. They got to make a very big reunion... I'm still waiting for that scene in the bath tub... you know, the scene you gave me a sneak peak of. ; ) can't wait for that. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Oct 01, 2006 2:38 am
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Elaine, WHAT are you doing?? Legolas IS your PRINCE! *bangs head at desk*
ok, now that I got that off my chest (LOL) I can speak rationally again *g*. Superb chapter, again great way of capturing everyone's emotions, and characters. I can't wait to see more! |
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ladyisis
Joined: 03 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
Location: UK
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Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:33 pm
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| fantastic stuff! So emotionally written you can't help but feel your heart ache everytime she pushes him away, I really hope she comes around! I don't usually follow works in progress as the suspense kills me!... But I am addicted to this story!! Keep up the great work, and I beg you (and the other readers will agree with me!) never to give up on this story! |
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