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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:26 pm
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teeheehee. I'm giggling at Elaine's embarrasment, even though I have to admit that if I was in that same position, I would be mortified too.
those two... *shakes head and grins* what more can I say? |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
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Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:21 am
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hahahaha... poor Elaine. On the bright side, at least it was the bra and not the bottom part. That would've been worse right?  |
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ladyisis

Joined: 03 Sep 2006 Reviews: 27
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Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:30 pm
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| THANKYOU SO MUCH! I spent all day at the hospital cos they said my waters had broken - only to be sent home in the eve telling me they made a mistake and baby wasn't budging! GRRRR lol - I read when I got home and it was such a feel-good chapter that I had a grin plastered on my face the rest of the evening - I think my poor husband thinks I've completely lost it!! I was laughing so much at the end, was a great way to finish a brill chapter! Can't wait to see how this feast plays out - I have sympathy for Elaine already!! |
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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:16 pm
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| a really nice chapter. I have to admit that I myself forgot about Eiaine's other life for a moment. I mean I was aware that it would be really odd if she never returned and her friends and family didn't know what happen to her but I still forgot about that. What is she going to say to them? "I married an elf." heehee, that would certainly call for someone to doubt her mental health. keep up the good work hun! |
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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Sun Dec 24, 2006 5:15 pm
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beginning of their downfall? That does not sound good at all. Hope its nothing too bad though, like I hope you don't kill anyone off.
A very steamy chapter I shall say, and I can't wait for the next update. |
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ladyisis

Joined: 03 Sep 2006 Reviews: 27
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Sun Dec 24, 2006 8:23 pm
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| Agreeing with sofia - beginning of their downfall! Eek! Great chapter, worth the wait! It's so sad she can't share her happiness with anyone when she is outside of Lim Aear, like her family. It is hard to see how that side of things can end amiably! I'd choose being in Lim Aear with Legolas over a modern life anyday lol |
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Shaylee7
Joined: 11 Jan 2006 Reviews: 18
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Sat Jan 13, 2007 10:10 pm
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| Uh oh! He's really mad now. I hope they can work things out. I've loved this story and look forward to reading more. |
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ladyisis

Joined: 03 Sep 2006 Reviews: 27
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Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:15 am
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| ooooooooooooooooo exciting chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I'm glad Legolas got angry as Elaine needs to understand the weight of her responsibility to Lim Aear and it's people. |
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sofia

Joined: 28 Mar 2004 Reviews: 78
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Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:09 pm
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| very dark angsty chapter. I loved it! lol. When the part of the orcs came I had this forbidding that Legolas is going to get seriously hurt or killed. It didn't help either that you mention that Legolas's heart felt heavy and a sense of uneasiness swept through him. Can't wait for the next update and Great job! |
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Shaylee7
Joined: 11 Jan 2006 Reviews: 18
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Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:35 pm
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| Great Chapter. Anxiously awaiting your next update! |
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