Reviews for "Lim Aear"

Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:05 am

Great chapter again, edge of your seat stuff! I love that Elaine was dishing out orders lol. I was reading on your site that you weren't as keen on Lim Aear when you read it back. I love Lim Aear BECAUSE it's fairy tale-esque. Sometimes when the real world gets too much for us I think we need a bit of fairy tale romance to remind us of what we used to want (prince on the white horse etc!). Angst is good and makes a good plot, but too much of it and no happiness at all in a story is too much in my opinion. If we wanted constant grief and hassle we'd not need to seek a time-out in fiction lol! It's sad that true love in reality is rare, but it is there, I believe myself lucky enough to have found it, but day-to-day life means it's impossible to be that fairy tale all of the time. Reading Lim Aear makes me forget the bills, not care what I have to cook for dinner, yet there's no clean dishes, I couldn't give a damn if the whole house needs a tidy up, and that the baby is now screaming for some attention! It reminds me that romance still lives if you dig beneath all of the above! So no, I don't think it too girlish fantasy-ish or romantic, I think your other readers would agree with me that it would be a shame for any of it to be changed or re-written, especially as it is your first fiction. Anyone?
(ps sorry I talk too much! lol)

Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:57 pm

it just keeps getting more tense! Good chapter, I can picture it clearly in my mind.
Sorry about your boyfriend troubles and such, Ellie! *hugs*

Fri Mar 09, 2007 1:49 am

This is sooo good! I didn't review in all the chapters because I started reading it around midnight last night(couldn't sleep) till 2am. Then I finished the rest of the story later that day on and off between doing chores untill just now. And it's 12:45am. This was a 'Can't put it down till it is finished story!' So keep it up because I will sit here untill the next update lol. (no I really won't do that I have grandchildren who come here and won't let me) But I'll be watching!

Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:05 pm

No I don't hate you, but "YOU ARE DRIVING ME INSANE!"(lol!!) Okay now that your computer is fixed get a move on. I can't stand cliffhangers and stuff like that. But then that is what makes a story good I think. Now I am never moving from this computer untill I see the next update. Great Job!

Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:45 pm

um... okay, wow. Did you not mention (or foreshadow) a few chapters ago that something bad was going to happen? Is this it? You better not kill Legolas off! Or have Elaine risk her life for him, thus ending in her demise. that would be too sad!

Wed Mar 28, 2007 7:44 pm

What an exciting chapter. I'm at the edge of my seat now. Please don't keep us in suspence for long.

Sun Apr 01, 2007 7:30 pm

Oh, no! She can't die. This is so sad. I had an uneasy feeling this story would have a sad ending, though I was hoping I was wrong! Is this the last chapter or is there more??

Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:02 pm

Oh,

oh, no... *sobs*

Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:22 am

Now that was well written. You made me ball my eyes out!(sniff sniff, Wah!) The End? Nah!!!!!

Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:05 pm

No, you can't end there!!! The valar can't be that cruel. Oh i really don't like sad endings. Sad smiley face

I have to admit though, it was extremely well written.

Oh, PLEASE don't let it end there!

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